Too shy to look for comfort's arms
Too sad to laugh like yesterday
Too sore from trials of life's alarms
Too glad for no more company
But there is still one thing she seeks
To take her hands and block it out
It can't get her what she can't see
Behind the hands she'll have no doubts
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a good strong poignant poem of fighting through the win at the end. love this one, Lorna.
Thanks Kevin......
A fine write Lorna.
Lorna,
There are times when one
must bury their head in
the sand, but ultimately
“...behind the hands
she’ll have no doubts “...
An awesome write that will
resonate beyond the read!
I enjoyed the excellent
choice of lyrics by
Garrett Hedlund to accentuate your poem!
Did you see the movie
COUNTRY STRONG?
~Laura~
Thanks L........ I'll go look for the movie....... haven't seen - in fact just found Hedlund! Enjoy your weekend! Tell me your menu for Sunday!
You’re welcome, my friend!
Sunday’s menu...hmmm??
My mom did request Osso Buco during the week. Maybe that’s what I’ll make! I’ll let you know later!
Ciao
greatly defined.
the way you used the words.
good harmony.
Thanks for your comments OP!
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