The sun is shining so bright in the beautiful blue sky
The birds are soaring through the clouds
The heat of the sun is hitting my face
I close my eyes and listen to my surroundings
It’s silent
The light from the sun begins to fade
I feel the air beginning to become crisp
A new light then arises from the sky
This light is different
This light is a form of darkness
I close my eyes once more and listen to my surroundings
Then I hear it
The sound I didn’t hear before
The sound of creatures of the night calling out to me
Telling me to join them
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Author:
Jaay (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 1st, 2018 18:21
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Comments1
This poem has a lot of imagery and description, so great job of that! However, I think it would do you well to add in more substance into it for a deeper meaning or underlying message in the future!
Thank you so much 😊
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