Open shores
Empty thoughts
Transparent waters
Ripple on my toes
Eternal dreams
Relief of longing
Free to exist effortlessly
Reflective beams
Heats serenity
Thrusts upon me
I close my eyes and
I finally see
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Author:
Miss M S Smith (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 2nd, 2018 10:14
- Comment from author about the poem: Remembering the blissful open waters in sunny Spain. A picture of the beautiful beach for keepsake.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 48
- Users favorite of this poem: Gabriella, marlenawood, Laura🌻.
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you did such a good job on this it truly is lovely bravo
Thank you so much hunny.
Very nice now i wanna go to the beach this summer, Keep up the good work
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Thanks so much.
Amazing and the scenery an water is therapeutic to my soul!! Much love
Aw pleased you like hunny.
BEAUTIFUL MAXINE ~ Espana por Favor ~ Sun ~ Sand ~ Sangria ! This is a lovely DODECA LAUDATIO (A 12 line eulogy !) to SPAIN ! Love the visual "Footprints in the Sand" Thanks for sharing and caring ~ Hugs BRIAN @@@
Thank you Brian ☺️
We can all go then - it don't look like anyone is on that beach yet! heehee.
Haha I’d love to get back there.
Super write that simply flows with tranquillity
Thank you so much Michael.
Maxine,
A beautiful poem and pic!
As Michael said,
it “flows with tranquility”!
I enjoyed the read very much!
~Laura~
Aw thanks hunny, much appreciated.
Heavenly beach and words!
Thank you River.
Lovely x
❤️
how do you do it?
How do I do what? 😀
ha! ha!
you know!
2 more comments
Wonderful write, those places are so special in life, they will never be forgotten
Thank you so much Gold. These places are always treasured.
Beautiful poem max very peaceful uplifting poem
Thanks Hun
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