Open Shores

Maxine Smith


Open shores

Empty thoughts 

Transparent waters

Ripple on my toes 

Eternal dreams

Relief of longing 

Free to exist effortlessly 

Reflective beams

Heats serenity 

Thrusts upon me 

I close my eyes and 

I finally see 




  • Author: Miss M S Smith (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 2nd, 2018 10:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: Remembering the blissful open waters in sunny Spain. A picture of the beautiful beach for keepsake.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 48
  • Users favorite of this poem: Gabriella, marlenawood, Laura🌻.


  • Gabriella

    you did such a good job on this it truly is lovely bravo

  • Netashi

    Very nice now i wanna go to the beach this summer, Keep up the good work

  • marlenawood

    Amazing and the scenery an water is therapeutic to my soul!! Much love

    • Maxine Smith

      Aw pleased you like hunny.


      BEAUTIFUL MAXINE ~ Espana por Favor ~ Sun ~ Sand ~ Sangria ! This is a lovely DODECA LAUDATIO (A 12 line eulogy !) to SPAIN ! Love the visual "Footprints in the Sand" Thanks for sharing and caring ~ Hugs BRIAN @@@

    • orchidee

      We can all go then - it don't look like anyone is on that beach yet! heehee.

      • Maxine Smith

        Haha I’d love to get back there.

      • Michael Edwards

        Super write that simply flows with tranquillity

        • Maxine Smith

          Thank you so much Michael.

        • Laura🌻

          A beautiful poem and pic!
          As Michael said,
          it “flows with tranquility”!
          I enjoyed the read very much!


          • Maxine Smith

            Aw thanks hunny, much appreciated.

          • RiverJordan

            Heavenly beach and words!

          • Sam Cork

            Lovely x

          • onepauly

            how do you do it?

            • Maxine Smith

              How do I do what? 😀

              • onepauly

                ha! ha!
                you know!

              • 2 more comments

              • Goldfinch60

                Wonderful write, those places are so special in life, they will never be forgotten

                • Maxine Smith

                  Thank you so much Gold. These places are always treasured.

                • stevievize

                  Beautiful poem max very peaceful uplifting poem

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