Commotion

Lee Renard Caspian

My mind is in a commotion

With memories like dominoes

Tumbling down and crashing in

 

Careless thoughts breath over 

The picture I so carefully crafted

To cover over the burning mess 

 

My mind is in a commotion

With memories like dominoes

Each scar running into the next

 

Feral hands run over

The tragic marks of my past

So eager to repeat them again

 

My mind is in a commotion

With memories like dominoes

Forever falling back

 

  • Author: Lee Renard Caspian (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 2nd, 2018 16:04
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments2

  • Netashi

    Very nice poem Lee, keep up the good work
    -Theta

  • onepauly

    the past in the present.



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