Deep Distress

kitcat

 

 

Pillow like marshmellow
Windows are stone
looking up at ceiling
lying here alone

Feel like being swallowed
By walls of felt
My life is a mess
The cards were dealt

One easy way to go
Sucked through papermash pipe
I'm slithered away
Out of sight

Down in the dark
Far from real
Happy I am now
As time is still

  • Author: Elaine (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 2nd, 2018 17:41
  • Category: Surrealist
  • Views: 69
  • Users favorite of this poem: marlenawood
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  • marlenawood

    Very deep and I enjoyed this love

    • kitcat

      Thank you so much well appreciated

      • kitcat

        Oh Thank you marlena for saving this as one of your favorites 😊

        • marlenawood

          Your welcome babe much love keep up the good work

        • Netashi

          Had felt claustrophobic in the beginning very nice poem, keep it up kitcat
          -Theta

          • kitcat

            Thank you so much Theta I appreciate your comment It is a bit claustrophobic

          • onepauly

            there are many ways to alter consciousness .
            these days once in a while I use
            alcohol.
            it feels great! but not everyday and not to much.

          • kitcat

            That is so true its good to have a drink now and again Unwind 😊 Be happy
            Cheers Onepauly

          • Lorna

            Walls of felt..... great line!

          • kitcat

            Thank you Lorna nice comment 😊



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