Deep Distress



Pillow like marshmellow
Windows are stone
looking up at ceiling
lying here alone

Feel like being swallowed
By walls of felt
My life is a mess
The cards were dealt

One easy way to go
Sucked through papermash pipe
I'm slithered away
Out of sight

Down in the dark
Far from real
Happy I am now
As time is still


  • marlenawood

    Very deep and I enjoyed this love

    • kitcat

      Thank you so much well appreciated

      • kitcat

        Oh Thank you marlena for saving this as one of your favorites 😊

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      • Theta the scholar

        Had felt claustrophobic in the beginning very nice poem, keep it up kitcat

        • kitcat

          Thank you so much Theta I appreciate your comment It is a bit claustrophobic

        • onepauly

          there are many ways to alter consciousness .
          these days once in a while I use
          it feels great! but not everyday and not to much.

        • kitcat

          That is so true its good to have a drink now and again Unwind 😊 Be happy
          Cheers Onepauly

        • Lorna

          Walls of felt..... great line!

        • kitcat

          Thank you Lorna nice comment 😊

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