Beneath the clouds is the home which we grow
Surrounding us, the dark rain overflows
Bodies shiver, such unbearable cold
Lips turn blue, our drenched clothes we are stuck to
Just as you admit defeat, you then see
Clouds shift, the beautiful sunshine will out
Once cold, now filled with warmth and energy
Dry clothes, eyes unfold, strength builds in your soul
The darkness will always pass over you
Learn and thrive, be prepared for the next time
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Author:
Miss M S Smith (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The tough times are always a struggle aren’t they?! We do need them though, to learn from and to become stronger for the next time.
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How true these well written words on the need to survive by facing what comes and pass through it to times of more enlightenment. A wonderful read Maxine.
Such lovely words Fay, thank you so much, truly pleased you like.
As day follows night - great work Maxine
Thank you Michael 😀
Felt like i was reading it on a cold day, the truest thing is we need hard times to evolve keep up the good work max
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We do indeed. Thanks so much.
I believe you are so right.
Thanks so much Pauly.
Thank you Maxine.
Poignant, perceptive and superbly vivid.
Good write.
Adversity and overcoming it produces great character in a person.
Keep writing
FineB
Appreciate the feedback, glad you like it thank you.
The rainbow always follows the storm. Wonderful write, Maxine!
Thank you hunny.
A fine write Maxine.
Appreciate it Orchidee, thank you.
Great write max it’s true we learn from our past especially the tough times we go through 😘
So true ☺️
Thanks for sharing MAXINE ~ Coming form Manchester you know that weatherwise ~ every Cloud has a Silver Lining and Sunshine (and a RAINBOW) after the Storm ~ so it is in LIFE ! In my (35 years) experience too ~ the dark days of Winter always pass to be replaced by the Joy ~ Colour ~ Vitality & Warmth of SPRING ~ AMEN ! Thanks for caring ~ Hugs BRIAN
Thank you so much Brian.
Beautiful write Maxine.
Thank you so much ☺️
Another gem from you baby. Keep them coming. I'm really enjoying reading the feedback you are getting. X
Thank you ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Maxine,
Your strength and judiciousness is praiseworthy! You’re a very perceptive young lady! No matter how dark it gets, you always see the light! That is truly a gift! I thoroughly enjoyed the read!
Hugs 🤗
~Laura~
Aww thank you hunny.
Superb positive write Maxine. Yes the clouds only hide the sun which will always be there for us all.
Exactly, thank you Gold.
very good I love your writing style
Thank you Hun.
Love this one Maxine! Lovely write.
Thank you hunny.
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