Liam Lawless

I Done Fucked Up

I knew a girl with hazel hair,

And oh how us boys did stare.

The beauty one soul could own

She felt so much like the embrace of home.


And then came an argument,

And with that, off she went,

To a new school,

And me The fool


Did cast here off so fast.

I ensure our friendship would not last.

I thought we were best friends

My fault it came to an end.

Two years later i messaged her

And yes i was drunk, for sure.

I should have left her alone. but

She still felt like the embrace of home



  • Maxine Smith

    Good write. Well done.

  • onepauly

    it does happen when we drink.
    I know from personal experience.

  • marlenawood

    It's good to have experienced this always live an learn because there is so many beautiful people out there trust me. Much love good write

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