Consequences of love

You left and..

He stopped smiling,
He stopped caring,
Because for him
It was too much bearing.

You left and..

His music got sad
His hands no longer magic
Forever lost in sorrow
Oh, isn't this tragic?

You left and..

You took a piece of him
Forever with you
And now he will never
Be able to go through

You left and..

He broke down
Down, down to his knees
He's all alone..
Time, forever shall freeze

You left and..

He picked up
That silver shining thing
Death soon shall come
To take him under its wing.


  • SLR

    It's sad when you realize how many people end their lives because of the end of a relationship. They can't see pay the pain that they're going through to the other side. Well written.

    • Agiel

      That is very much true. Thank you.

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