Serenade life with sweet sugar delight
Melodies, our feelings sing fruitfully
Inject with zest, feeling fine, feeling fresh
Lips pursed, then we burst, into the bliss we kiss
Endeavour to exude, this charming mood
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Miss M S Smith (Pseudonym) (
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WOW MAXINE ~ Love acrostics and this one ticks all the boxes ! You have a perfect SMILE and I love all your pictures ! I especially love line four because your photos are always so full of Love's promises !
Lips pursed, then we burst, into the bliss we kiss !
This is doubly beautiful physically for the action
Linguistically for the double internal rhyme !
Thanks for Caring & Sharing
Hugs ~ Angela & Brian XOX
Wonderful words Brian, thank you so much for your support.
Always
Maxine
Maxine,
An awesome acrostic! One of my favorite structures! Reading it certainly put a smile on my face!
Actually, whenever I see your smiling face, it automatically makes me smile! You’re very beautiful!
Hugs 🤗
~Laura~
Awww how lovely, your comment has just put a smile on my face.
Thank you so much Laura ☺️☺️
The pleasure is all mine! 😘
Hugs 🤗 and kisses 😘 to Charlie & Izzy!
Very good poem max it’s always good to smile 😊
Aw you made me smile today kid lol ROAD TRIP
Haha road trip road trip 😂
A fine write Maxine.
Thank you Orchidee.
Your work improves with every posting - - superbly crafted Maxine
Thank you so much Michael, such a lovely comment.
So sweet, lyrical and light. Lovely! Inject with zest, endeavor to exude? You certainly have! Thank you! You've definitely made my day a little brighter.
Thanks so much.
Super positive write.
"Smile, it confuses people"
Thank you Gold.
So many smiles this one created! Lovely and fun!
Aw thank you hunny.
sounds like a little bliss
Aw thanks Ron.
my pleasure
This put a smile on my face, such lovely writing as always! I have an instant craving for them rainbow sticks full of sugar? haha. ~E
Aw glad to oblige lol thank you Hun.
You know its a good poem when you feel refreshed. Great work
Aw thank you Michael, pleased you like it.
zestfully bursting nostalgia! great, lol
This is absolutely beautiful. 🙂
Love acrostics!
I do also, they become addictive, thank you ☺️
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