mind loss
toss away all sanity
yelling...you dont hear it
the walls are caving in on you
the rood is coming down on you
taking the needle and making it higher and the walls further
drifting away
chasing you loosing you
distance growing
your not showing you any more
darker when you think its matching up
lighters on the floor empty
the door only gets more holes
now your rolling up problems
snorting the wrong direction
injecting down fall
self medicating destruction
now your leaving me with your soon to be grave
and now nothing........
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Author:
lemons poetry (
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- Comment from author about the poem: this one is about my best friend getting into drugs and growing apart. based on a true story.......... :/
- Category: Friendship
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Very emotional, has a great beat. Also extremely relatable. I like your imperfect capitalization. Your entire style really suits it. You have a awesome choice of wording hear.
Keep it up!
Very detailed and gritty poem, Hope your friend gets over drugs they don't need that in their life. Keep up the good writing lemons
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