The One Who Knew What Was Going On
A lot of people cared about me
But not enough to see the truth
What was really going on
It crushed my heart
Ruined my life
Destroyed everything I've made and done
Feeling the same thing every day
Surrounded by people but still alone
I've kept on a fake smile for way too long
You couldn't shut up
You didn't care
Now everything I had is gone
I can't hide it anymore
I gave up
I was weak, not strong
I have only one question
For the person who did this
Who knew what was going on
Are you happy now?
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leostars_poems (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: And another sad poem, But I promise there will come a Happy one after this One ;-). Also big thanks for the nice comments so far! I'm glad you guys like my poems!!
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People who purposely hurt others are never happy, never satisfied. There's something broken inside their mind. Keep writing, and keep posting. Happy or sad, whichever speaks to you at the time.
Thank you for your kind comment. The most poems I write are for my friends or family. It's to help them with their feelings. I'm really glad you like it 😉
Wow! The title sounds like a song title. The poem itself is also very musical and the emotions are very real. This is a really great poem (and could possible be made into a really good song)!
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