I love this simple tranquil feeling
Eyes half closed
Head back
Studying the contours
Of my cobwebbed
Artex ceiling
Pleasantly plastered
Praying to the artex God
Soft spirals spinning through my coconut head
I wish this was real
Soft touch and feel
Bordering the living and the dead
Do not disturb
Don't wake me up
Summer sun, bumble bees, buttercups
Basking in the smooth
Forgetting tomorrows rough
A mirrored pond
Peace and still
Ingesting medicine but I'm not ill
Do not worry
Just let me be
I'm a tourist
Politely asking....
A shark languidly basking...
In a sea
A sea of artificial tranquillity
Comments2
I love how this flows
Its so good
Hi CathBee, thank you so much for your kind comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Take care - Syd
We have to find our relaxation wherever we can. 🙂 love the lines 'ingesting medicine but I'm not ill' and 'a sea of artificial tranquility' . Well written.
Thank you SLR, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and those lines. I appreciate all feedback.
Take care - Syd
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