AlexHoy

Easygoing Free Flowing

I can’t find myself to care

For these opinions you share

Most people can’t bare

But most people aren’t there

One of a kind rare

Take a seat in that chair

Over there, if you dare

Do you have love to share?

Do you worry about your hair?

What if it wasn’t there?

Would that be fair?

Would your heart tear?

If you fell from the air

Would you be scared?

Or would you be snared?

If everyone cared

If everyone paired

If everyone shared

If nobody compared

Would hate be spared?

Violence would be impaired

Love would repair

All the despair

Are you prepared?

To unleash love unshared?

Comments3

  • CathBee

    I love the rhyme, this is really good

    • AlexHoy

      Again, thank you very much!

    • SLR

      I'll admit I did wonder if you could make the rhyme work all the way through. Great job. Meaningful lines with a fun twist. Great message.

      • AlexHoy

        Thank you so much that means a lot to me! :)

      • nmurner

        I like this :). The consistent rhyme made my fly through it when I read it out loud; the message hit me once I was done like when you're done with a long run and think back on it.

        • AlexHoy

          Thank you so so much you don’t even understand how much I appreciate this compliment thank you :)



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