Why do I do the things I do
I'm far from stupid but I still have no clue
I work day in I wok day out
End of the weekend I'm skint without a doubt
Why can't I stop,why can't I be strong
As soon as I have a beer,it all goes wrong
Life seems shit without a beer and a line
Over the years it become a craving of mine
Maybe one day I'll give it all up
Then realise my life,it was jus corrupte
So never say never and always be strong
live your life,you may not have long
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Author:
Finchyheart (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Make a change before its to late
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Raw truth my friend and well expressed
Weed stopped me staying on that path
The reason I could not stop or felt powerless
I was still at war with my past and the present
This is partly why I write, I'm not sure why you do?
But in your words I heard my self and friends, even one that lost his life going to fast round a bend making a midnight exchange. (only 26)
Another the most powerful woman I ever met for two years she gave me the most amazing inspiration to be a better me. But inside her the same war, alcohol made it that she could not cope any more, ended it all on the stairs, leaving 3 kids under 16.
Life has shown me alot of things but one thing is all the same. You will go mad if you don't look in that mirror and find peace with it all and you will destroy your self if you keep things bottled up.
Good luck on your journey my friend, sorry I felt had to say so much, better in than out 😉
Keep writing and make that change!
Thank you again for writing this one
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