Rise and fall
Swelling
Spinning
The roar of it all
Then
Loud piercing drop
Silence
Nothing But all of us
Tenseness
Nothing to hide the lack of trust
Everyone stuck in the emptiness
One second past
And
One word laughed
The current starts to play
then we all get swept away
R.E
4/11/18
- Author: R.E ( Offline)
- Published: May 19th, 2018 12:20
- Category: Surrealist
- Views: 92
- Users favorite of this poem: _hella_darling_, MaddieJ
Comments2
I'm intrigued by this poem... what was on your mind when you wrote it?
I feel like it's a comment on how people behave, always avoiding silence and stillness. But I'm more curious what you think
it is actually about the sound of a school lunch room and how everyone will go silent for the slightest second
I love this! What an observation!
thanks, i'm really glad you liked it.
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