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Maxine Smith

Kind, delightful, sweet sips of heavens bliss

Idyllic spirit of lust unveils 

Sunshine, serenity, in love, we live 

Swim in our ocean of the purest sin 

 

  • Author: Miss M S Smith (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 20th, 2018 09:00
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 53
  • User favorite of this poem: Laura🌻.

Comments9

  • Laura🌻

    Maxine,
    An awesome acrostic!
    A favorite form of mine...
    as you probably know!
    Love the pic ❤️
    PERFECTION

    Hugs 🤗
    ~Laura~

    • Maxine Smith

      Too kind Laura, thank you so much for your lovely words ☺️

      • Laura🌻

        You’re very welcome!

        Btw...
        Thank YOU for having me saved as favorite poet! You’re too kind! 😘

      • 2 more comments

      • Michael Edwards


        Came up in hieroglyphics and had to pop it into google translate to read it (see below). So pleased I took the trouble - a great write Maxine....................................


        Kind, delightful, sweet sips of heavens bliss

        Idyllic spirit of lust unveils

        Sunshine, serenity, in love, we live

        Swim in our ocean of the purest sin

        • Maxine Smith

          Oh I don’t know why that’s happened, I’m pleased you managed to find a way to read it.
          Lovely response Michael, thank you.

        • orchidee

          Something in the formatting of some poems. I got hieroglyphics too! Now Michael's translated it, I've swooned at the second line - I would! lol.

        • Maxine Smith

          Lol happy you managed to read it also Orchidee, thanks for stopping by 😀

        • stevievize

          Lovely poem very good write max

        • Goldfinch60

          I too had hieroglyphics and had to translate it -it was well worth it.

          • Maxine Smith

            Aw thanks Gold, I really don’t understand why it’s done that, thank you for taking the time to translate and I am pleased you like it.
            Hopefully my today’s poem is showing normally?!

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Thanx for sharing MAX ~ fortunately I have a friend who lives in HYROGLYPH (great place for a Holiday !) so he was able to translate for me ! My DAD speaks Greek so I have no trouble with these cryptic poems ! Lovely Love Acrostic on KISS ! Yes my experience too ! Sips of heaven's bliss ~ Spirit of lust unveils ~ Serenity in Love ~ Ocean of purist sin ! And that's just a KISS ~ WOW thanks fr caring & sharing ~ I can see why MPS put into CODE MODE ~ You could have given STEVE (orchidee) a fatal heart attack ~ with JUST ONE KISS ! Yours as ever ABBRACCI e BACI ~ BRIAN XOX Please visit SUMMER HOLIDAYS ~ B !

            • Maxine Smith

              Aw thanks Brian, glad you managed to find a way to read it also.

            • SLR

              Hope you don't mind that I screen shot it for later. Very sweetly sexy. Great write. Glad mine came out fine, I'm technologically disabled and would never have been able to get it translated.

              • Maxine Smith

                Thanks so much, I don’t mind at all you saved it, pleased you liked.

              • Sam Cork

                Another thumbs up with this one x



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