Kind, delightful, sweet sips of heavens bliss
Idyllic spirit of lust unveils
Sunshine, serenity, in love, we live
Swim in our ocean of the purest sin
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Miss M S Smith (Pseudonym) (
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Maxine,
An awesome acrostic!
A favorite form of mine...
as you probably know!
Love the pic ❤️
PERFECTION
Hugs 🤗
~Laura~
Too kind Laura, thank you so much for your lovely words ☺️
You’re very welcome!
Btw...
Thank YOU for having me saved as favorite poet! You’re too kind! 😘
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Came up in hieroglyphics and had to pop it into google translate to read it (see below). So pleased I took the trouble - a great write Maxine....................................
Kind, delightful, sweet sips of heavens bliss
Idyllic spirit of lust unveils
Sunshine, serenity, in love, we live
Swim in our ocean of the purest sin
Oh I don’t know why that’s happened, I’m pleased you managed to find a way to read it.
Lovely response Michael, thank you.
Something in the formatting of some poems. I got hieroglyphics too! Now Michael's translated it, I've swooned at the second line - I would! lol.
Lol happy you managed to read it also Orchidee, thanks for stopping by 😀
Lovely poem very good write max
Cheers chick ☺️
I too had hieroglyphics and had to translate it -it was well worth it.
Aw thanks Gold, I really don’t understand why it’s done that, thank you for taking the time to translate and I am pleased you like it.
Hopefully my today’s poem is showing normally?!
Thanx for sharing MAX ~ fortunately I have a friend who lives in HYROGLYPH (great place for a Holiday !) so he was able to translate for me ! My DAD speaks Greek so I have no trouble with these cryptic poems ! Lovely Love Acrostic on KISS ! Yes my experience too ! Sips of heaven's bliss ~ Spirit of lust unveils ~ Serenity in Love ~ Ocean of purist sin ! And that's just a KISS ~ WOW thanks fr caring & sharing ~ I can see why MPS put into CODE MODE ~ You could have given STEVE (orchidee) a fatal heart attack ~ with JUST ONE KISS ! Yours as ever ABBRACCI e BACI ~ BRIAN XOX Please visit SUMMER HOLIDAYS ~ B !
Aw thanks Brian, glad you managed to find a way to read it also.
Hope you don't mind that I screen shot it for later. Very sweetly sexy. Great write. Glad mine came out fine, I'm technologically disabled and would never have been able to get it translated.
Thanks so much, I don’t mind at all you saved it, pleased you liked.
Another thumbs up with this one x
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