Candlewitch

Pieces of Pisces (or pieces of my soul)

Pieces of Pisces (or pieces of my soul)

 


            Wiser now..
            I watch the surface
            while
            all the melted laughter
            fades
            from your voice
            indifference
            fills the muted shadows
            draws
            the chilling deep
            from
            the light
            of
            your love
            grown sleepy and heavy
            in the twilight of your interest

Comments5

  • Michael Edwards

    Great to see you posting - hope you have recovered fully and what a superb piece of work - going into faves and the first to do so for many a week.

    • Candlewitch

      dear Michael,

      I am doing well now, thank you so much for asking 🙂 you do me great honor by favoring this piece! have a great weekend!

      *hugs, Cat

    • Goldfinch60

      Very emotive write Cat.

      It is so good to see you back Cat.

      • Candlewitch

        dear Goldfinch,

        thank you for reading and the nice comment. it is so good to be back!

        *hugs, Cat

      • ZIGGY

        wow cat your talent for writing such pieces seems to demand we slow it down and read and think about every word you have spun together amazing as always your number one fan ,,,zigs x

        • Candlewitch

          dear Ziggy,

          the same could be said of your fantastic writings....always giving the extra effort, and making the reader think! thank you so much for reading my poetic offering!

          love, Sis

        • Laura🌻

          Cat,
          I missed your special writing! So glad you’re back and posting again! It is rather sad, but oh so beautifully expressed!

          Welcome back...

          ~Laura~

          • Candlewitch

            dear Laura,

            I had pneumonia for a month and recovery was slow. but I am doing well now and glad to be back 🙂 thank you for your support!

            *big hugs, Cat

          • dusk arising

            Good to see you writing again. Having a dry spell myself.
            I think this is a very fine emotive piece. It is sad and heavy, i imagine you taking a deep breath and exhaling as if saying to yourself 'i told you so'.
            Your final line is wonderful. This goes into my fav's without hesitation, a fine piece.

            • Candlewitch

              hello dusk,

              thank you for your wonderful comment and the welcome back 🙂 you are very kind!!!

              *big hugs, Cat



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