Did I commit a mistake? Mistake by letting everything go .
Knew what I wanted to say but acted like I don't know.
It was really hard, hard to stay quiet.
But I had to coz I knew I wasn't right.
All those promises I made seemed like lies.
Now 100s of tears rolling down my eyes.
Mind stopped for a while and the heart was running its race for a mile.
Little you know, it's tough, tough to put up a fake smile.
Everytime I look at the mirror, I see regrets in my eye.
And then I question myself, I kept me in this position but why?
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Author:
Umsmile (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 30th, 2018 07:17
- Category: Love
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I know regrets spell so well, with this writing I'm positive you'll find the reason. Our lessons are our own, thank you for sharing some of yours.
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I can't really say anything clever. But with all honesty your regrets are your own. And i guess you might've been punishing yourself. But that's my opinion. Great poem.
Yes. As you said I was punishing myself but not anymore. And thank you. 😊
Well ,I'm glad you found a way to stop punishing yourself.
Hope this is a watershed, a turning point for you. It's never too late to put your hand up and say i made mistakes, i was wrong. We are all human, hopefully those you tell will know what it is to be human and have regrets too.
Very good writing.
Thank you so much. 😊
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