I keep drowning every time I close my eyes
But I'll burn alive if I never blink
And every time I breathe in
It is neither smoke nor water but dirt
As I bury myself deeper into the ground.
-
Author:
CathBee (
Offline) - Published: May 30th, 2018 10:20
- Category: Sad
- Views: 21
Offline)
Comments2
The feeling that you are unable to help your self can be so overwhelming.
This is a very powerful write.
thank you so much
Great descriptive writing here Cath. It's a shame you felt so down when you wrote this. I often write when feeling down and/or intoxicated.
Take care - Syd
Thank you, and I feel I can't really write when I am happy but it comes so naturally when I am upset or feeling down. I think this is the case for a lot of people.
Thank you for your comment.
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.