Maxine Smith

-x- Unwritten -x-

 

You give me paper 

I give you ink 

You home my thoughts 

I watch the words sink

 

My blank canvas 

Lost in possibility 

Intentions unclear 

Beauty in uncertainty 

 

Pen to paper

My journey unfolds

The end is unwritten 

Excited to be told 

Comments12

  • Fay Slimm.

    The concept of making memories and not relying on things for our happiness you bring out so clearly with this lovely collection of family pictures and words which make readers think - - well done again Maxine for reminders of what really counts in our search for a full life.

  • Michael Edwards

    Quite a little journey and so well expressed - nice one Maxine.

    • Maxine Smith

      Much Appreciated Michael, pleased you like.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      POSITIVE MENTAL ATTITUDE
      That sums you up MAXINE !
      You are a LADY on my wavelength
      We call it POWER OF POSITIVE THINKING !

      Thanks for sharing such A Positive Poem 'n Pic ~ Love the Collage of Family & Friends ~ You shed a lot of Light ~ Love & Joy right through MPS ~ while lots of Poems are Gloom & Doom ~ we all LOVE you !
      Love the message in your Poem ~ we are all writing a STORY of our life and I like you want mine to be eventful and exciting ~ like your COLLAGE ~ Awesome ! Love the last DOUBLET ~ The End is unwritten ~ Excited to be told ! If we are not excited about the FUTURE MAX ~ we may as well be dead ! Thanks for your comment on my Poem about my TOWN ~ Dead in the day ~ Frenetic @ Night ~ I'm so glad I'm under 40 ~ Some Seniors are so Pessimistic about the Future ~ so unlike you and I ! Please check my FUSION on best day of the WEEK ~ Every Blessing ~ Thanks for Being YOU ~ Con Mucho Amor ANGELA y BRIAN ~ Hugs @@@@@@@

      • Maxine Smith

        Thank you so much Brian.

      • nicolibellamont

        I love it. very simple. Thank you for sharing

        • Maxine Smith

          Thank you for the supper Nic.

        • Lorna

          Lots of fun and optimism in this poem and all the pictures Maxine!

        • GON

          I love this!

        • ron parrish aka wordman

          a creation in progress

        • stevievize

          Life is for living my beautiful friend and making memories and starting a new journey is happening.. great message and beautiful write

          • Maxine Smith

            Aw my beautiful friend, huge thanks ☺️ Our journeys of dreams begins.

          • Sam Cork

            Simple elegant to the point. Love the last 2 lines x

          • FineB

            Thanks Maxine.

            An incredible poem.

            Our lives are unwritten and we the authors of our own lives and how they turn out.

            Keep writing
            FineB

            • Maxine Smith

              Sorry for the late thanks but thank you so much. Not managed to write lately, lots going on and writers block. Thank you very much for a lovely comment ☺️

            • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

              And you paint the poetic canvass with words in a fine artsy way. Evocative and superb poem indeed. Kudos.

              Soo nice to read from u again. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too , titled , O human heart"

              • Maxine Smith

                Thank you so much Hun, sorry for the late reply, I haven’t been on for a while, il be sure to stop by your page and check out your recent work.

              • Crystal Hope

                A really beautiful piece! 🙂

                • Maxine Smith

                  Aw I’m really happy you like it ☺️



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