You give me paper
I give you ink
You home my thoughts
I watch the words sink
My blank canvas
Lost in possibility
Intentions unclear
Beauty in uncertainty
Pen to paper
My journey unfolds
The end is unwritten
Excited to be told
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Author:
Miss M S Smith (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A little write about taking advantage of life. ‘Don’t worry about the past, so live for today, as we are not promised tomorrow’ - a favourite quote of mine. Life is like art, like paper, a blank canvas awaiting to be told, don’t be defeated, life is unwritten and it’s for us to create our story. I’m a believer in fate, I am also believe in PMA and making the most of everything to so, just a little write about that really, hope you like. Photo of my family, my kids, neices and sister, making memories, make adventures, liveLoveHard.
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The concept of making memories and not relying on things for our happiness you bring out so clearly with this lovely collection of family pictures and words which make readers think - - well done again Maxine for reminders of what really counts in our search for a full life.
Thank you so much Fay.
Quite a little journey and so well expressed - nice one Maxine.
Much Appreciated Michael, pleased you like.
POSITIVE MENTAL ATTITUDE
That sums you up MAXINE !
You are a LADY on my wavelength
We call it POWER OF POSITIVE THINKING !
Thanks for sharing such A Positive Poem 'n Pic ~ Love the Collage of Family & Friends ~ You shed a lot of Light ~ Love & Joy right through MPS ~ while lots of Poems are Gloom & Doom ~ we all LOVE you !
Love the message in your Poem ~ we are all writing a STORY of our life and I like you want mine to be eventful and exciting ~ like your COLLAGE ~ Awesome ! Love the last DOUBLET ~ The End is unwritten ~ Excited to be told ! If we are not excited about the FUTURE MAX ~ we may as well be dead ! Thanks for your comment on my Poem about my TOWN ~ Dead in the day ~ Frenetic @ Night ~ I'm so glad I'm under 40 ~ Some Seniors are so Pessimistic about the Future ~ so unlike you and I ! Please check my FUSION on best day of the WEEK ~ Every Blessing ~ Thanks for Being YOU ~ Con Mucho Amor ANGELA y BRIAN ~ Hugs @@@@@@@
Thank you so much Brian.
I love it. very simple. Thank you for sharing
Thank you for the supper Nic.
Lots of fun and optimism in this poem and all the pictures Maxine!
Thank you Hun.
I love this!
Much appreciated.
a creation in progress
Thanks for stopping by Ron.
my pleasure
Life is for living my beautiful friend and making memories and starting a new journey is happening.. great message and beautiful write
Aw my beautiful friend, huge thanks ☺️ Our journeys of dreams begins.
Simple elegant to the point. Love the last 2 lines x
Thanks Maxine.
An incredible poem.
Our lives are unwritten and we the authors of our own lives and how they turn out.
Keep writing
FineB
Sorry for the late thanks but thank you so much. Not managed to write lately, lots going on and writers block. Thank you very much for a lovely comment ☺️
And you paint the poetic canvass with words in a fine artsy way. Evocative and superb poem indeed. Kudos.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too , titled , O human heart"
Thank you so much Hun, sorry for the late reply, I haven’t been on for a while, il be sure to stop by your page and check out your recent work.
A really beautiful piece! 🙂
Aw I’m really happy you like it ☺️
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