Light may vanish

Music may cease.

Nature may die

Piece by piece.

Birds may stop singing

Their songs of life.

Breathing may be

As sharp as a knife.

But no matter how

The world seems to bend,

My love for you

Will never end!


  • Stan Rodriguez

    nice sweet poem

  • SLR

    I agree. Commitment is hard sometimes, love isn't always enough on its own, but if the love is real and each treats the other well and they're both determined to make it work and make the other happy, then is definitely worth it! Love this post! So sweet.

  • dusk arising

    Commitment is an unquestioning devotion. I like the way you've described some of the tribulations which may test your commitment. There are any more and terrible trials ahead for you two to face, overcome and grow all the stronger for having done so.
    "Live long and prosper"

  • Goldfinch60

    Good way to express your love, long may it last.

  • Lorna


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  • LittleRedPoet

    Thank you all!

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