Let the cobwebs slip away
Face the sorrows of today
Hold your head up high
Without asking why
Would they really have a clue
What you've been going through
There doesn't have to be a reason why
Just wave the stars goodbye
Let your troubles slip away
Keep your worries well at bay
Sew a smile on your face
They will never see a trace
Of the past you've left behind
Just wave the stars goodbye
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Author:
G.A (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Just a glimpse of what it takes to move on and whether it's worth it or not. Past experiences, I guess, of what it's like to have abandoned your old life for something less.
- Category: Family
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Comments3
beautiful poem xx
Great rhyming. If I could offer some constructive critique though, I'd like to say that you don't absolutely need to rhyme, and rhyming shouldn't be a crutch for lines that have little reason for being there besides the rhyme itself.
Thank you I will keep that in mind for next time
Great!
Uplifting yes, but our yesterdays make us what we are today. We carry our yesterdays either as a burden or an education.
Recently i read a poem on MPS where the poet said the purpose of our life in this existence was to educate s for the next.... food for thought.
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