Gemma

Wave the stars goodbye

Let the cobwebs slip away

Face the sorrows of today

 

Hold your head up high

Without asking why

 

Would they really have a clue

What you've been going through

 

There doesn't have to be a reason why

Just wave the stars goodbye

 

Let your troubles slip away

Keep your worries well at bay

 

Sew a smile on your face

They will never see a trace

 

Of the past you've left behind

Just wave the stars goodbye

 

Comments3

  • Michela Vismara

    beautiful poem xx

  • GON

    Great rhyming. If I could offer some constructive critique though, I'd like to say that you don't absolutely need to rhyme, and rhyming shouldn't be a crutch for lines that have little reason for being there besides the rhyme itself.

    • Gemma

      Thank you I will keep that in mind for next time

      • GON

        Great!

      • dusk arising

        Uplifting yes, but our yesterdays make us what we are today. We carry our yesterdays either as a burden or an education.
        Recently i read a poem on MPS where the poet said the purpose of our life in this existence was to educate s for the next.... food for thought.



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