My magic show
Nobody watch
Nobody see
No glory
Today
Yesterday gone
Today is coming
New day arrive
A brand new day
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Author:
scary-mary (
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- Category: Reflection
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I feel like this starts really strong but loses it on the last line due to the repetition. I think perhaps if you cut the last line or changed it, it would be stronger. Otherwise I actually love this write.
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