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The Girl I Want

She’s the one I want

The one that will keep me all together

In my mind she’s the one I jaunt

When I look at her she makes me feel as light as a feather

When I see her she catches my attention

My friends all say it’s just puppy love

I even get excited when her name is mentioned

She must be angel sent down from up above

I may not be the perfect man

But I’ll always treat her like a queen

I may not have a plan

For her though I’ll go clean

She deserves everything

And I hope to give her the world

I’ll even put a ring on her finger and I’ll be her king

Comments4

  • Snowflake Incorrigable

    You've got 'jungle fever' mate!
    Jaunt to the doctor quick, mate, and mind you don't trip or you'll be munching carpet with a busted lip.
    imao.
    very romantic if a little OTT.

  • Dai\'lynn Green

    I love it but looking from the guys that has been through relationship after another. Enjoy the days with her but um don't forget about you. Don't forget to find your own happiness that doesn't have to do with her. Writing poetry, writing books, and giving advice is what I love. Just remember to find things to love within yourself and love yourself...

  • Frogspoetry

    I would let her know how you feel,you never know,she might feel the same.Maybe even be your saving grace

  • Gabriella

    that's so good!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it



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