Birddie Jane

But even still

Tonight

Was the best night

Of my entire life 

I have already given to you

The purest part of myself 

And you already know 

You hold my heart

But tonight 

Was the best night

Of my entire life

Tonight 

I stayed up all night 

Talking with you 

Tonight 

I explained to you

Why I care about you 

Tonight 

I told you 

I love you 

Tonight 

Was the best night 

Of my entire life 

Tonight  

I felt a connection 

Not a spark necessarily 

But something special 

Something for us

Tonight

Was the best night

Of my entire life 

Tonight

You said you cared

Tonight 

You said.you like it

That I was always there

I know 

We have a long way to go

Before we can become 

Something more 

But even still

Tonight

Was the best night

Of my entire life 

Comments2

  • Pintu Mahakul

    The best night noted in life amazingly and expressed the views. An interesting poem is shared here.

    • Birddie Jane

      I am so glad you like it

    • Candlewitch

      may you have many, many more moments like this! good write!

      *hugs, Cat



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