I'll Fight Poem, by Finley Fire, at My poetic side

The whispers all around me have started to fade away,

Because you've shown my heart and mind that you are here to stay,

My mind has been so dark before but now the light shines through,

Showing me that even in the dark there's always a way to breakthrough,

You've given me the chance to live my life just right,

And as long as you're beside me I know just how to fight,

I'll fight away the whispers that tell me to do wrong,

And then I'll come back home to you where I feel like I belong,

I'll fight away the darkness that seeps into my mind,

Because you've shown me that some people can be kind,

You've taught me how to love myself and that I do belong,

I don't know how to thank you for showing me something I should have known all along.

- Finley Fire

Comments +

SLR June 17th, 2018 23:44
I've read your other work and I don't know if you're having a good day or if you're getting stronger but this piece has a definite positive attitude that was missing in the others. Great job. Great message.
- Finley FireJune 18th, 2018 17:01
  Thank you, I'm trying to be stronger and I hope it works. Thanks again for you kind words.

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