the beautiful sound
resonating in my ears
if i had the choice
i would listen to it for years
playing one note
for hours and hours
the subtle sound
blossoming like flowers
with the sensation
of a vibrant attraction
and the fulfilling feeling
of satisfaction
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Author:
Mackayla Carrie (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: To me, this is about being able to take a step back and learning to gain satisfaction from things in life that we may not notice at first. Being able to pick out the subtle sounds and vibrancy of the earth and the life around us could be the very first step to being satisfied. Not only with yourself and those around you, but also with the life you are living. Here´s the most important thing about this poem though; it doesn´t matter what I thought when I wrote it. It matters what you thought as you read it. I hope you enjoyed. I hope you are satisfied.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments2
good first poem, nice rhyme and meter. welcome ww
I liked your poem and your comments.
Very satisfying and enjoyable.
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