SLR

Rain on the window

  The rain on the window

Reminds me of you.

Driving down a country road,

Passing time, enjoying the view.

Driving just to see where it led.

So happy just to be together.

Do you ever remember?

Is it something that you do?

I think of you often,

How you were, how we were,

How I used to be.

I cry at night sometimes,

When there's no-one there to hear.

The rain on the window

Reminds me of you.

 

 

Comments5

  • tepo

    Nothing needs to come from you
    It's spot on as it is
    Great read

    • SLR

      Thank you. You always have such nice comments. Generous as always. I'm glad you enjoyed it as is.

    • orchidee

      Yes, a fine write SLR.

      • SLR

        Thank you so much.

      • Snowflake Incorrigable

        A real poem directly from the heart, needs nothing more, says it all.
        Thanks for sharing.

        • SLR

          Thank you. I was feeling melancholy when I wrote it. I'm glad you feel it turned out ok.

        • Andrew Charles Forrest

          It's all in the moment S
          Don't change a thing you captured it perfectly
          Andrew

          • SLR

            Thank you. It's bittersweet to me.

          • E-Poems

            The title drew me in alone and then the poetry delivered such a relatable feeling. - E

            • SLR

              Thank you so much! I'm glad you could relate.



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