Another write to heal my inner child

Poetic Dan



Another day still unable to do it
Say to much could be used as a bullet

Words become encrypted hoping to disguise it
The problems I have I'm scared of describing

Self discipline is the thing that I'm lacking
When urges control all of my actions

I've written this in the desire to flip this perspective of the who that I see
No longer letting my inner child dictate my boundaries

 Remembering everyone is free (listen) to wear sunscreen.

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  • Heartwriter

    Loved this. So nicely written. Really good.

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you, I'm trying my hardest not to put myself down.

    • Laura🌻

      Dan,
      You may not be able to do it today, or tomorrow, or the next day...but YOU WILL do it!
      Yesterday I read QUOTE by Lawless.
      It’s a great quote...

      “Life is a test.
      There are no failing grades,
      just a passage.”

      The passage may be arduous, but you’ll be able to handle it!

      Loved the clip and the message in the pic!
      Believe in yourself!

      ~Laura~

      • Poetic Dan

        I'm lost in words but the breath I now take is truly grateful you are on this earth.

      • orchidee

        Here now - I told folk - all they gotta be afraid of in life is me singing! Cos I shall never stop! There ya go! heehee.

        • Poetic Dan

          Never would I ask you to
          Even if its out of tune
          If You're having fun then I am too.

        • Christina8

          This is a very good write. Loved the post about feeling behind in life because I certainly do too. Thanks for sharing, Dan!

          • Poetic Dan

            I dislike finding I forgot to reply please know your words help me to continue to write.
            I thank you with all of my lives

          • Frogspoetry

            VERY HEARTFELT.I CAN FEEL YOUR PAIN THROUGH YOUR WORDS.KEEP LOOKING UP AND PRAY FOR THE SAVIOR JESUS CHRIST TO TOUCH YOUR LIFE AND ENTER INTO YOUR HEART.YOU RE SOMEBODY WHO CAN MAKE A DIFFERENCE TO OTHERS,I BELIEVE YOU ARE WORTH SAVING,EVERYBODY IS,EVEN IF THEY DON'T FEEL WORTHY,YOU ARE.I CARE BOUT YOU,AND WOULD LIKE TO SEE YOUR STORY OVERCOME THE PAIN THAT YOU EXPERIENCE.THANK YOU FOR SHARING DAN,KEEP PRESSING ON AND DON'T GIVE UP.

            • Poetic Dan

              Wow thank you so much just what I needed to read made the reason I missed it was because it was better now. Thank you for helping me stand proud!



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