Claudelle DeLuna

Awakening

As she learns to set herself free,

The illusion of the world becomes a lie,

A lie of the past, indeed to vast for her soul,

She now lives in a circle of redemption,

Truth, honor and faith!

Align the center of her being,

The holy trinity crowns her thoughts,

Sacred protection to the daughters of the King!

Success in the journey of their awakening.

Comments7

  • Joe Dawson

    The lessons of life. Well said, well captured. Fine work. Joe

    • Claudelle DeLuna

      Thank you for your support greetings from South Texas a border town near Mexico. Blessings😊

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      WELCOME CLAUDELLE (Lovely name !) and thanks for your first poem ~ it is beautifully penned with great flow and rhythm. Love the Title AWAKENING and the message ! I too love to be in the "Circle of Redemption" Truth ~ Honour ~ Faith and for my thoughts to b crowned by the Holy Trinity ~ AMEN ! It's 10:15 am here in UK and I'm just off to Church but i won't get a better homily than your lovely poem ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ some are by my Fiancee ANGELA who is in New Zealand on a Years Work Placement (Physiotherapist) MPS works by mutually commenting on each others Poems ~ it is an excellent site ~ Thanks B !

      • Claudelle DeLuna

        Thank you, for your time and support
        Greetings from South Texas a border town near Mexico. I look foward to reading your poetry and your fiance' s Blessings 😊

      • Frogspoetry

        WELCOME CLAUDELLE,YOU ARE A BEAUTIFUL WRITER,YOUR WORDS COULDN'T BE TRUER.EXCELLENT JOB.YOU WILL LOVE IT HERE.

        • Claudelle DeLuna

          Thank you for sharing your time with me and your support! I read your poetry and I love your work.
          Greetings from South Texas a border town near Mexico. Blessings 😊

          • Frogspoetry

            Thank you very much,you are very talented also.

          • Fay Slimm.

            Wise words and well written reminders of life's on -going path of discovery - - - welcome Claudelle to this friendly poetry site.

            • Claudelle DeLuna

              Thank you, and Greetings from my corner of the world, South Texas a border town near Mexico!

            • The Poet Doctor

              Few words that inspires even the most coldhearted heart!

            • Poetic Dan

              Great entrance and well expressed

            • Kurt Philip Behm

              Love these lines....

              "The holy trinity crowns her thoughts,
              Sacred protection to the daughters of the King!"

              I've written a lot about the mystery of the Trinity.
              My sailboat is actually named 'The Trinity.'

              Kurt



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