Candlewitch

Anger Loosed

Anger Loosed

 

open a vein

miss the artery

too much anger

for precise accuracy

too much rage

to be confined

to a single page

hatred in red

overpowers the sight

enrages the decision

clouds the vision

purple frustration

inflames the soul

hands around your neck

taking control

I find you in contempt

your crime is your attitudes

spilling acrimony

into my sea of calming latitudes

Comments4

  • Heartwriter

    Yep. I know folk like that. Fine write, nicely said.

    • Candlewitch

      thanks, Heartwriter, it is good to be understood...would you believe that this woman cannot figure out why I never phone her? LOL!

      *hugs, Cat

      • Heartwriter

        Actually I would! It's called ignorance. Lol

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      • Frogspoetry

        YOUR SISTER SOUNDS LIKE MY YOUNGER BROTHER.CAUSES TROUBLE JUST TO HAVE A LITTLE ENTERTAINMENT,IT DRIVES ME CRAZY.BUT THE LORD HAS GIVEN ME THE STRENGTH TO HANDLE IT.

        • Candlewitch

          hello!
          it seems like every family has a trouble maker. thanks for your comment!

          *hugs, Cat

        • onepauly

          hi candlewitch' ,
          interesting story inside the poem.

          many people are instigaters to fights. some cant live without it. just glimpse an eye on car crashes, accidents right? the people getting out of their cars, and a lot of times they use more then their fists. they must get real angry. im glad im just an observer.


          • Candlewitch

            hello onepauly,

            thank you for reading and giving me your take on the situation!

            *hugs, Cat

          • Goldfinch60

            Good write, it is such a shame that siblings can be like this. Maybe one day she will come round and be nice.

            • Candlewitch

              dear Goldfinch,

              I suppose that there is always hope. thanks for the thought!

              *hugs, Cat



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