Cause I’m really giving 100 to a guy giving 50.
I’m being the most supportive but my heart has been heavy to a guy who isn’t ready.
Let’s get through this, cause at times we went through it ,
but how many times do I have the time for the same excuse your about to admit.
I’m mean when I’m a assertive,
I’m weak when I agree but when I’m happy I’m both cause it’s a distraction for what’s come to be .
I’m so comfortable, I can stop breathing and my body will hesitate to leave you.
My body is my mind and my body loves you but my mind wants the best of you to be the best of me and recently it’s been physically not spiritually.
I’ll go through a storm for you, like you once did for me. But everyday is a journey and you haven’t reached me yet.
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Author:
Curls (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: How over time changes happen in a young relationship
- Category: Love
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Comments2
So powerful and true. Thank you
No , thank you for your compliment . Means a lot
Amazing from the heart outpouring from a strong standpoint (not the usual victim standpoint seen so often on MPS).
I would find writing like this very difficult if not impossible to do. You're voicing dissatisfaction but not yelling 'i'm leaving'.
Really good stuff.
Thank you for your feedback , I appreciate it !
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