Candlewitch

senryu trio: love

 

Senryu Trio: Love

 

 

bright eyes shine softly

wake and smile at morning dew

sweet kiss from shy orbs

 

 

treasury of  charms

stolen kisses are to me

a wealth of loving

 

 

Joyousness of heart

when my eyes gaze into yours

we become as one

Comments7

  • Michael Edwards

    Fine work Cat - don't see poetry forms often enough here on MPS.

    • Candlewitch

      why, thank you Michael! glad you enjoyed it! have a good weekend!

      *hugs, Cat

    • dusk arising

      Generally i dont like 'regimented' or syllable counted work but your work here is an exception.
      Why? because yours has feeling, it's not JUST clever..

      • Candlewitch

        thanks, d.a.

        what a great compliment! 🙂

        *hugs, Cat

      • Heartwriter

        A beauty of a read Cat. Well done!

        • Candlewitch

          thank you Heartwriter!

          *hugs, Cat

          • Heartwriter

            Your welcome!! Always a pleasure to read your writes.

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            THANKS CAT ~ SENRYU are great form just 17 syllables (5 7 5) short & sweet ! The KEY elements of Love ~ Eyes ~ Kisses ~ Hearts are all neatly encapsulated in your ELEGANT TRIO ~ Thanks for sharing ! Please check my Poem on TIME ~ Thanks BRIAN !

            • Candlewitch

              thank you Brian,

              I'm glad you enjoyed this write!

              *hugs, Cat

            • onepauly

              beautifully put.

              • Candlewitch

                thank you!

                *hugs, Cat

              • Goldfinch60

                Good senryus Cat.

                • Candlewitch

                  dear Goldfinch,

                  thanks for reading and responding!

                  *hugs, Cat

                • lasergraph

                  The glorious uniting. great work.

                  • Candlewitch

                    thank you dear lasergraph!

                    *hugs, Cat



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