Devil or Disciple

ZIGGY

 

 

 

Are you devil or disciple armed with forgiveness

or a rifle do you target revenge or salvation death

instead of creation can you see your self in others

eyes or are you the reason for their painful tears

 

Could you stand alone and hold your head high without

knowledge of wrong doing and greet those that trespass

against your good will and name with just repose

and not seek repentance within their wrong doing

 

Travel the rugged path less known without thanks

or gratitude to help those who will never know of

your deeds or gesture just to have helped your

fellow man and be happy within that knowing

 

Can you stand aside from popularity and greed

to be the one the lonely destitute need or are

you so focused on your own need of plenty failing

to see those who's plates are empty

 

We are all spirits clothed in flesh

born with free will to hate or help

our yesterdays are cast in deed and

decision tomorrow is free which will it be

  • Author: ZIGGY (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 15th, 2018 17:09
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Laura🌻

    Zigs,

    An excellent introspective and inspiring write!
    There’s much to think about!

    “...can you see yourself in others’ eyes or are you the reason for their painful tears...”

    “We are all spirits clothed in flesh born with free will to have or help”

    Powerful words! We are free to choose the path we want to follow!


    ~Laura~

    • ZIGGY

      Laura thanks so much for your comment and sorry for been late to reply I have been spending a lot of time with my uncle who is dying sadly ,,,,,zigs

      • Laura🌻

        Zigs,
        No worries my friend!
        So, so sorry about your uncle!
        Spend as much time as you can with him! It’ll mean so much to him!
        We’ll catch up at another time!
        All the best and love to your uncle! I hope he’s not suffering too much!

        ~Laura~

        • ZIGGY

          Hi Laura thanks for the kind words I am here now with him early am he is peaceful at the moment

        • Edthepoet

          Hooked from beginning to end. Great write Ziggy

          • ZIGGY

            hi there many thanks for the read and comment comments mean a lot to me read you soon ,,,zigs

            • ZIGGY

              hi there nice to see a new face read my words, I have been distracted of late family issues ,,,regards ,,,zigs

            • orchidee

              A fine write Z. I myself leave out some punctuation, but not altogether. Some helps, I feel, so that it does-not-get-confusing-and-all-run-into-one!

              • ZIGGY

                Hi there so sorry for late reply having some family issues at the moment, yes you are right with your comment if I ever get serious I might start using punctuation ,,,,,,,,,,,zigs



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