My mind is filled with action it never wants to stop
It's rhyming for the sake of it with every single thought
I can even hear the drum beats kicking it along
The problem is they pile up and then you can't pick one
With so many things to write about it's impossible to cope
But this is where the magic happens if you let it flow
For the only way to truly know is to let it go
I've been told I can be so intense they feel it to the bone
This is where I would say it's because I am a drug
I understand if you get hooked or want to call the cops
But one thing I am certain of and it's coming from my core
I'm never again going to hide a Dan single word or thought
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Poetic Dan (
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Dan,
A great write!
A hiding Dan? NEVER!!
THAT WOULDN’T BE YOU!!
Write to your heart’s content!
I do enjoy reading your work !
~Laura~
As I always do with your response
Helping me want to grow more
I know you know this but I'd say it to every star, that soul of yours is as bright as they are.
Thank you for being the who that is you from the who that is me
It’s my pleasure!
What beautiful poetic comments to my comments! You’re truly AMAZING!
Me bit confused ,with all those 'whos'. Do you mean 'yoo-hoo?!' Now I've lost the plot! lol.
Now I not sure 😉 but any hoo, I think you can be who ever you want to be. Who's are everywhere, even in the sea...he he. You can't loss the plot with me as this is normal lunacy!
I am faith dan.
and so are you.
believe it or not.
very good post.
Much appreciated, I definitely believe in love my friend. With a bit of faith 😉
love is forever.
Reticence wont help you or any of us --- let it out!
From your recent writings i feel you do struggle with 'should i or shouldn't i say what i want to say.' Well you've been writing here for a while now and you're getting a good reception so i think it's fair to say MPS likes you. So get it off ya chest sir... say wotever ya want! (Nike) Just do it!
You sir have hit the nail on the head, this is my biggest issue maybe not so much here but in my life yes. I should stop flipping the coin and do as I do here for like you have said, it been awhile of you all knowing my thoughts and yet your still here.
Thank you again for these supporting words and going with your feelings too 😉
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