Reyas

Broken

Broken heart

With a

Broken mind

Inside a 

Broken soul

Inside a 

Broken body 

With a 

Broken life

Inside a 

Broken family

Inside a

Broken home

With a 

Broken community

Inside a 

Broken nation 

Inside a 

Broken world

With a 

Broken planet 

Inside a

Broken universe

Comments3

  • E-Poems

    Love love love.

  • dusk arising

    Break out of the broken outlook. Many things may be broken but repairable. However the world, which is the planet we live upon, and the universe are not broken at all.
    Delightfully negative piece.

    • Reyas

      You’re absolutely correct. Thank you for reading.

    • Unsub

      Reyas,

      yup; it's broken!

      Actually enjoyed the simplicity of this & the structure.

      Unsub.

      • Reyas

        Thank you for the kind words, very much appreciated.



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