Scrambled Letters

Thunder

When lightning strikes

and thunder churns

in the deepest depths

thoughts of you burn

Hotter than the sun

Comments6

  • poetboy5454

    Wow, incredibly powerful and thought-provoking.

  • orchidee

    A fine write SL. It may thunder in parts of the UK soon. Depends. Might be hit-and-miss for some places.

  • Heartwriter

    Wow wee that was hot! Great one.

  • dusk arising

    Words of an old Elton John song were once quoted to me by a lady i loved 'I guess that's why they call it the blues, time on my own should be time spent with you, laughing like children, rolling like thunder under the covers'.
    Yes, thunder is a very stirring phenomenon. Making love beneath crashing thunder is exhilerating.

  • Goldfinch60

    Very good and very true write.

  • sylviasearcher

    Powerful



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