It seems like the world is spinning too fast, too fast for anyone to appreciate. The seconds fall like flies and memories are quickly turned into grains of sand blown past in the changing winds of life. It used to be that time was slow, that memories were ingrained into our minds like stone etchings. The only singular moment that time stops free falling and begins to slowly glide is when you look into their eyes. You have the seconds to appreciate the shape, size, layers of colours in their iris praying for that 45% more dilated pupil just for an inkling they like you, and that moment just right there lasts a life time. You have never been so quiet, still or concentrated. Nothing else could exist but that instant and unfathomable connection that has been locked when their eyes met yours. Beauty is seen to be things that have been created by human hands, so what thing so great could have made their eyes. By the wish of an eyelash I pray, that I will never have to live without his blue blue eyes.
- Author: Eli Dagger (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: July 26th, 2018 17:13
- Category: Love
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Well i wrote that having read your 'that moment, the moment' i would read you other work and i'm so glad that let me to here.
These two pieces are just so wonderful.
How i fell, describing that moment you knew you fell in love with your man is equally excellent.
You describe so beautifully how our mind races through so many thoughts in the blink of an eyes timebredth when excitement overtakes.
There is something about your writing which accelerates my appetite for the next line. Were you an author i suspect i would find your books 'unputdownable'
I'm going to save both poems as favourites today and move along to read more of you.
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