Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
WE’RE GOING SHOPPING
Rozina said:
Would love to try this. When I go to UK I shall look for this. Enjoyed this.
April 23rd, 2022 18:05
Rozina said:
Would love to try this. When I go to UK I shall look for this. Enjoyed this.
April 23rd, 2022 18:05
WE’RE GOING SHOPPING
dusk arising said:
LOL good job you didn\'t ask her to put a shed on it.
Oh my i havent tasted lemon curd in a while... got me thinking now you devil.
He was sure his words had been heard
when he requested they buy lemon curt
but in-store it got quite trickly
the list was all sticky
and everything written was blurred
A cheerful young gal in a dress
assists shoppers in-store M&S
can i help you she asked
as M.E. walked past
fingers coated in a pale sticky mess
April 23rd, 2022 04:39
dusk arising said:
LOL good job you didn\'t ask her to put a shed on it.
Oh my i havent tasted lemon curd in a while... got me thinking now you devil.
He was sure his words had been heard
when he requested they buy lemon curt
but in-store it got quite trickly
the list was all sticky
and everything written was blurred
A cheerful young gal in a dress
assists shoppers in-store M&S
can i help you she asked
as M.E. walked past
fingers coated in a pale sticky mess
April 23rd, 2022 04:39
WE’RE GOING SHOPPING
Saxon Crow said:
But you sure can taste it! Nice one Mike
April 23rd, 2022 02:30
Saxon Crow said:
But you sure can taste it! Nice one Mike
April 23rd, 2022 02:30
WE’RE GOING SHOPPING
orchidee said:
Yes, good trip-thingy too. Miss Berles knows \'triptych\'.
Good write M. lol.
April 23rd, 2022 02:17
orchidee said:
Yes, good trip-thingy too. Miss Berles knows \'triptych\'.
Good write M. lol.
April 23rd, 2022 02:17
WE’RE GOING SHOPPING
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words Michael in that second stanza.
I too like lemon curd.
Great triptych.
Andy
April 23rd, 2022 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words Michael in that second stanza.
I too like lemon curd.
Great triptych.
Andy
April 23rd, 2022 01:38
LIMERICKS 111, 112 and 113
dusk arising said:
There was a young lady from Horton
who had a long tit and a short \'un
to make up for the loss
she had a c... like a hoss
and a fart like a 650 Norton
(above is not one of mine)
An inventive young chappy from slough
invented a highbrow plough
sat up there astride
he ploughed a furrow so wide
he split his own difference somehow
A billious young gal from Dunbart
suffered with wind round her heart
when it started pounding
the noise was resounding
by golly could that lady fart
April 22nd, 2022 05:00
dusk arising said:
There was a young lady from Horton
who had a long tit and a short \'un
to make up for the loss
she had a c... like a hoss
and a fart like a 650 Norton
(above is not one of mine)
An inventive young chappy from slough
invented a highbrow plough
sat up there astride
he ploughed a furrow so wide
he split his own difference somehow
A billious young gal from Dunbart
suffered with wind round her heart
when it started pounding
the noise was resounding
by golly could that lady fart
April 22nd, 2022 05:00
LIMERICKS 111, 112 and 113
L. B. Mek said:
your painting, made those
cloistered notes, I\'ve been supressing
jump out and overwhelm me..
your words
introduced a whimsically light, note
to my morning..
a page, of artistry\'s healing
capabilities
you\'ve showcased for us today..
thanks Michael
April 22nd, 2022 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
your painting, made those
cloistered notes, I\'ve been supressing
jump out and overwhelm me..
your words
introduced a whimsically light, note
to my morning..
a page, of artistry\'s healing
capabilities
you\'ve showcased for us today..
thanks Michael
April 22nd, 2022 04:49
LIMERICKS 111, 112 and 113
Rozina said:
I so admire your skills of effortless hilarious limerick production! As well as your wonderful art. Will keep practising.
April 22nd, 2022 02:29
Rozina said:
I so admire your skills of effortless hilarious limerick production! As well as your wonderful art. Will keep practising.
April 22nd, 2022 02:29
LIMERICKS 109, 110 and 111
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay that last one was glorious. They\'re all spectacular though, thanks as always!
April 21st, 2022 08:40
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay that last one was glorious. They\'re all spectacular though, thanks as always!
April 21st, 2022 08:40
LIMERICKS 109, 110 and 111
Paul Bell said:
If it keeps me out of jail, the bible is my aliba.
April 21st, 2022 05:08
Paul Bell said:
If it keeps me out of jail, the bible is my aliba.
April 21st, 2022 05:08
LIMERICKS 109, 110 and 111
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fantastic, Michael.
Love every one of them.
April 20th, 2022 17:18
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fantastic, Michael.
Love every one of them.
April 20th, 2022 17:18
LIMERICKS 109, 110 and 111
Neville said:
three of the bloomin very best sir ..
oh\' & I love the artwork pinned to the top bit of this particular page .. N
April 20th, 2022 03:41
Neville said:
three of the bloomin very best sir ..
oh\' & I love the artwork pinned to the top bit of this particular page .. N
April 20th, 2022 03:41
LIMERICKS 109, 110 and 111
dusk arising said:
110 had me in fits on the second line. I love them all.
Finally he\'d realised
and it came as such a surprise
for he gained so much joy
from his newfound toy
which dangled between his thighs
For a while he thought he\'d been bested
After all that time he\'d invested
on close examination
his sole exclamation
indeed she was quite double chested
At once he became quite lovelorn
a new fascination was born
he discovered that boobs
could be viewed on the tube
now he spends everyday watching porn
April 20th, 2022 03:02
dusk arising said:
110 had me in fits on the second line. I love them all.
Finally he\'d realised
and it came as such a surprise
for he gained so much joy
from his newfound toy
which dangled between his thighs
For a while he thought he\'d been bested
After all that time he\'d invested
on close examination
his sole exclamation
indeed she was quite double chested
At once he became quite lovelorn
a new fascination was born
he discovered that boobs
could be viewed on the tube
now he spends everyday watching porn
April 20th, 2022 03:02
LIMERICKS 109, 110 and 111
orchidee said:
Fido\'s saving me from a swoon on the second one! lol.
Good berles there M.
April 20th, 2022 02:19
orchidee said:
Fido\'s saving me from a swoon on the second one! lol.
Good berles there M.
April 20th, 2022 02:19
LIMERICKS 109, 110 and 111
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Michael, especially the third one - so true.
Andy
April 20th, 2022 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Michael, especially the third one - so true.
Andy
April 20th, 2022 01:15
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
DestinysPerspectives said:
I really love this poem! It\'s honest and not a topic I have come across in poetry very often.
April 18th, 2022 17:06
DestinysPerspectives said:
I really love this poem! It\'s honest and not a topic I have come across in poetry very often.
April 18th, 2022 17:06
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
Rocky Lagou said:
I swear your artworks are so beautiful and inspiring. You\'ve truly got a talent. And the poem just tying it all together... wonderful job!
April 18th, 2022 08:33
Rocky Lagou said:
I swear your artworks are so beautiful and inspiring. You\'ve truly got a talent. And the poem just tying it all together... wonderful job!
April 18th, 2022 08:33
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
Rozina said:
I don\'t know the answer but I know your poem is Amazing. If I sit down doing nothing at all but daydreaming about going on holiday, is that counted as doing nothing at all? The mind is so busy planning an itinerary!
April 17th, 2022 18:01
Rozina said:
I don\'t know the answer but I know your poem is Amazing. If I sit down doing nothing at all but daydreaming about going on holiday, is that counted as doing nothing at all? The mind is so busy planning an itinerary!
April 17th, 2022 18:01
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
Ok Waleed said:
Best poem I’ve read in a very long time
April 17th, 2022 15:35
Ok Waleed said:
Best poem I’ve read in a very long time
April 17th, 2022 15:35
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
Neville said:
my ma used to say \'its harder where there\'s none\' .... I still don\'t know what the hell it means tho\' .............. I love those iris, or whatever they are Michael ...
April 17th, 2022 10:29
Neville said:
my ma used to say \'its harder where there\'s none\' .... I still don\'t know what the hell it means tho\' .............. I love those iris, or whatever they are Michael ...
April 17th, 2022 10:29
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
Paul Bell said:
Doing nothing is an art, and usually requires a clipboard. A clipboard signifies importance, and people keep out your way, I\'ve noticed.
April 17th, 2022 07:25
Paul Bell said:
Doing nothing is an art, and usually requires a clipboard. A clipboard signifies importance, and people keep out your way, I\'ve noticed.
April 17th, 2022 07:25
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
orchidee said:
I was bit miffed. A Bishop said \'Ohh, do nothing at all sometimes\'.
It\'s OK for him, in a pic of him swanning around on a sledge in the snow with his children.
Well, they only works Sundays anyway - don\'t they?!
April 17th, 2022 02:29
orchidee said:
I was bit miffed. A Bishop said \'Ohh, do nothing at all sometimes\'.
It\'s OK for him, in a pic of him swanning around on a sledge in the snow with his children.
Well, they only works Sundays anyway - don\'t they?!
April 17th, 2022 02:29
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Does Miss Berles allocate the sylla-berles, so we know when we\'ve finished? Or at least, we know how many berles are given to us for each poem.
April 17th, 2022 02:27
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Does Miss Berles allocate the sylla-berles, so we know when we\'ve finished? Or at least, we know how many berles are given to us for each poem.
April 17th, 2022 02:27
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
Goldfinch60 said:
That passion will keep you going forever in life Michael no matter what you are passionate about.
Andy
April 17th, 2022 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
That passion will keep you going forever in life Michael no matter what you are passionate about.
Andy
April 17th, 2022 01:08
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
dusk arising said:
I is already finished boss, that\'s why i\'m doing nothing at all.
April 17th, 2022 00:42
dusk arising said:
I is already finished boss, that\'s why i\'m doing nothing at all.
April 17th, 2022 00:42
IT’S HARD DOING NOTHING AT ALL
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your words based on flowers .. I imagine it is difficult feeling such feelings within but just doing ‘ nothing ‘
April 17th, 2022 00:20
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your words based on flowers .. I imagine it is difficult feeling such feelings within but just doing ‘ nothing ‘
April 17th, 2022 00:20
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