Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
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Goldfinch60 said:
I do hope that Alexa cuddles you as well Michael.
Andy
June 1st, 2022 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
I do hope that Alexa cuddles you as well Michael.
Andy
June 1st, 2022 00:34
LIMERICK 120
L. B. Mek said:
what why, is your wonderful wife away?
(luv the stark, sharp white tones
of those mountain peaks
such, deft touches
amongst a sea of wondrous colour)
thank you Michael, lovely
(I sense the presence
of baron hollowness
in your artwork\'s idyllic scenery
as mirror to your Poetry\'s words)
May 31st, 2022 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
what why, is your wonderful wife away?
(luv the stark, sharp white tones
of those mountain peaks
such, deft touches
amongst a sea of wondrous colour)
thank you Michael, lovely
(I sense the presence
of baron hollowness
in your artwork\'s idyllic scenery
as mirror to your Poetry\'s words)
May 31st, 2022 05:53
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dusk arising said:
overnight not a single sound was heard
till google woke me with a soothing word
but somehow it just dont make the grade
not a patch on my old Teasmade
i remain an early thirsty bird
kicked out me bed, theres no peace here
made to struggle wi\' caffitiere
coffee grinds
and bacon rinds
it\'s enough to raise an old mans tear
Shes so ungrateful t\'other half
sippin coffee in her morning bath
she\'ll not come down
till i warm her gown
i\'ll tell her she can stick it up her..... more tea vicar?
May 31st, 2022 02:22
dusk arising said:
overnight not a single sound was heard
till google woke me with a soothing word
but somehow it just dont make the grade
not a patch on my old Teasmade
i remain an early thirsty bird
kicked out me bed, theres no peace here
made to struggle wi\' caffitiere
coffee grinds
and bacon rinds
it\'s enough to raise an old mans tear
Shes so ungrateful t\'other half
sippin coffee in her morning bath
she\'ll not come down
till i warm her gown
i\'ll tell her she can stick it up her..... more tea vicar?
May 31st, 2022 02:22
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Goldfinch60 said:
Aah, that swinging chain, a thing of the past now but still remembered.
Andy
May 30th, 2022 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Aah, that swinging chain, a thing of the past now but still remembered.
Andy
May 30th, 2022 00:09
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MendedFences27 said:
My chuckle for the day. Some may not be aware of the chain in question,
but I remember one from Grandma house. You made me laugh. Thank you. - Phil A.
May 29th, 2022 11:56
MendedFences27 said:
My chuckle for the day. Some may not be aware of the chain in question,
but I remember one from Grandma house. You made me laugh. Thank you. - Phil A.
May 29th, 2022 11:56
LIMERICK 119
dusk arising said:
I listed each bog on a map
in case i need a quick crap
once felt theres no stopping
caught short doing shopping
whilst seated I\'ll oft take a nap.
Caught short by a rattling door
i realise I\'d started to snore
defecation completed
bodyweight now depleted
its time to go shopping some more
meandering round Marks and Sparks
I\'m plagued by troublesome farts
shop assistants in coma
from my trouser aroma
seeking more airy space I depart
Your super limericks have once again flushed out the ridiculous in my rhyming. Nice one M.E.
May 29th, 2022 10:48
dusk arising said:
I listed each bog on a map
in case i need a quick crap
once felt theres no stopping
caught short doing shopping
whilst seated I\'ll oft take a nap.
Caught short by a rattling door
i realise I\'d started to snore
defecation completed
bodyweight now depleted
its time to go shopping some more
meandering round Marks and Sparks
I\'m plagued by troublesome farts
shop assistants in coma
from my trouser aroma
seeking more airy space I depart
Your super limericks have once again flushed out the ridiculous in my rhyming. Nice one M.E.
May 29th, 2022 10:48
LIMERICK 119
JudyStella said:
As Teddy said, love this toilet limerickšwaiting for more!
May 29th, 2022 10:34
JudyStella said:
As Teddy said, love this toilet limerickšwaiting for more!
May 29th, 2022 10:34
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orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
Erm, is the seat warm for Miss Berles\' use?
May 29th, 2022 01:51
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
Erm, is the seat warm for Miss Berles\' use?
May 29th, 2022 01:51
LIMERICK 118
Rozina said:
A chuckle in the morning to start the day. Fantastic watercolour like koi fish in the pond.
May 25th, 2022 21:16
Rozina said:
A chuckle in the morning to start the day. Fantastic watercolour like koi fish in the pond.
May 25th, 2022 21:16
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Fay Slimm. said:
Giggling again at your form of wit - - and loving the watercolour with its dashes of coloured surreal. Great post Mike.
May 25th, 2022 07:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Giggling again at your form of wit - - and loving the watercolour with its dashes of coloured surreal. Great post Mike.
May 25th, 2022 07:28
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orchidee said:
Good write M.
You know Mr W. Wix? Miss Berles know him?
May 25th, 2022 02:23
orchidee said:
Good write M.
You know Mr W. Wix? Miss Berles know him?
May 25th, 2022 02:23
LIMERICKS 115, 116 and 117
Rocky Lagou said:
Marvelous job Michael! The second one got me good! I adore your limericks!
May 23rd, 2022 08:19
Rocky Lagou said:
Marvelous job Michael! The second one got me good! I adore your limericks!
May 23rd, 2022 08:19
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Christina8 said:
The second one is hilarious, but they are all great. Limericks are difficult to do! Great job!
May 22nd, 2022 09:32
Christina8 said:
The second one is hilarious, but they are all great. Limericks are difficult to do! Great job!
May 22nd, 2022 09:32
LIMERICKS 115, 116 and 117
MendedFences27 said:
Had to look up \"fly tipper.\" But then what a good chuckle I had to start my Sunday morn. Artwork is amazing, as usual. Liked \'em all. - Phil A.
May 22nd, 2022 09:10
MendedFences27 said:
Had to look up \"fly tipper.\" But then what a good chuckle I had to start my Sunday morn. Artwork is amazing, as usual. Liked \'em all. - Phil A.
May 22nd, 2022 09:10
LIMERICKS 115, 116 and 117
orchidee said:
Oh lol. good writes and pic M.
Fido dashed to save me from a swoon on No.2.
May 22nd, 2022 01:55
orchidee said:
Oh lol. good writes and pic M.
Fido dashed to save me from a swoon on No.2.
May 22nd, 2022 01:55
LIMERICKS 115, 116 and 117
Saxon Crow said:
Well No 2.... We\'ve all been there!
May 22nd, 2022 01:28
Saxon Crow said:
Well No 2.... We\'ve all been there!
May 22nd, 2022 01:28
A DARKSOME PLACE
Rozina said:
Wow. A haunting piece. And the artwork too. Wonderful.
May 20th, 2022 18:29
Rozina said:
Wow. A haunting piece. And the artwork too. Wonderful.
May 20th, 2022 18:29
A DARKSOME PLACE
MendedFences27 said:
Who is she? Oh so many choices. Is she goodness, democracy, civility, or Mankind herself? Fantastic artwork, great poem depicting the sad state of this world. Loved it, - Phil A.
May 20th, 2022 10:42
MendedFences27 said:
Who is she? Oh so many choices. Is she goodness, democracy, civility, or Mankind herself? Fantastic artwork, great poem depicting the sad state of this world. Loved it, - Phil A.
May 20th, 2022 10:42
A DARKSOME PLACE
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow Michael, I love how connected we were with our posts today. I also wrote about aging and the inevitable. I literally adore this piece, the way your paintings always aptly illustrate your poems are also such a nice added touch. I sense this sensation.
May 20th, 2022 08:10
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow Michael, I love how connected we were with our posts today. I also wrote about aging and the inevitable. I literally adore this piece, the way your paintings always aptly illustrate your poems are also such a nice added touch. I sense this sensation.
May 20th, 2022 08:10
A DARKSOME PLACE
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
in another life
I would start saving, from birth
to collect all your Art..
I could spend years
getting, lost-in
and trying to find
my, way out-off
this wondrously mesmeric, artwork
and probably end up
with like an entire collection
of poetry, from my journey..
you\'re so talented, Michael
thanks for choosing to share
May 20th, 2022 05:08
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!!!
in another life
I would start saving, from birth
to collect all your Art..
I could spend years
getting, lost-in
and trying to find
my, way out-off
this wondrously mesmeric, artwork
and probably end up
with like an entire collection
of poetry, from my journey..
you\'re so talented, Michael
thanks for choosing to share
May 20th, 2022 05:08
A DARKSOME PLACE
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a write Mike and so realistic it sent shivers to stay long after the read
May 20th, 2022 03:04
Fay Slimm. said:
A haunt of a write Mike and so realistic it sent shivers to stay long after the read
May 20th, 2022 03:04
ODDITIES (7&8)
FredPeyer said:
What can I say? When you are good you are good! Both painting and poem!
Kudos
Fred
May 20th, 2022 02:29
FredPeyer said:
What can I say? When you are good you are good! Both painting and poem!
Kudos
Fred
May 20th, 2022 02:29
A DARKSOME PLACE
FredPeyer said:
Haunting picture, haunting poem. I haven\'t been back for a long time and you changed a lot! But I love it!
May 20th, 2022 02:23
FredPeyer said:
Haunting picture, haunting poem. I haven\'t been back for a long time and you changed a lot! But I love it!
May 20th, 2022 02:23
A DARKSOME PLACE
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Yep, if not Miss Berles last days, it\'s KP\'s last days! Her current days in fact, from where she has joined The Old Trout Club. lol.
May 20th, 2022 01:51
orchidee said:
Good write and pic M.
Yep, if not Miss Berles last days, it\'s KP\'s last days! Her current days in fact, from where she has joined The Old Trout Club. lol.
May 20th, 2022 01:51
A DARKSOME PLACE
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Michael.
Love the artwork.
Andy
May 20th, 2022 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Michael.
Love the artwork.
Andy
May 20th, 2022 00:38
ODDITIES (7&8)
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, loving these \"oddities.\" A truly witty ride it was. Also adore the abstract art.
May 19th, 2022 09:52
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow, loving these \"oddities.\" A truly witty ride it was. Also adore the abstract art.
May 19th, 2022 09:52
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