Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Cyclothematic Poetaster
Neville said:
Far more than just ink on paper ..
you have freed it for the world and for all time ..
This really needs to be read time and time again not locked in a drawer somewhere, or upon a shelf ..
It (I mean Cyclothematic Poetaster) is far more than just the sum of its parts even .. it is overflowing with both witticisms and universal truths .. I take my effin hat off to you Phil ... Neville
November 3rd, 2023 02:01
Neville said:
Far more than just ink on paper ..
you have freed it for the world and for all time ..
This really needs to be read time and time again not locked in a drawer somewhere, or upon a shelf ..
It (I mean Cyclothematic Poetaster) is far more than just the sum of its parts even .. it is overflowing with both witticisms and universal truths .. I take my effin hat off to you Phil ... Neville
November 3rd, 2023 02:01
Cyclothematic Poetaster
Teddy.15 said:
This is equisite poetry dear Phil, makes one pause to think on each and every line. Kudos on your last lines, I wasn\'t expecting that. Brilliant. 💜
November 3rd, 2023 01:31
Teddy.15 said:
This is equisite poetry dear Phil, makes one pause to think on each and every line. Kudos on your last lines, I wasn\'t expecting that. Brilliant. 💜
November 3rd, 2023 01:31
Wild in \"The Wilderness\"
Neville said:
My word sir fences, your authors note is so understated ..
You have crafted something here that is somewhat amazing & very noir .. N
October 30th, 2023 03:21
Neville said:
My word sir fences, your authors note is so understated ..
You have crafted something here that is somewhat amazing & very noir .. N
October 30th, 2023 03:21
Wild in \"The Wilderness\"
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say this is more than a small tale dear Phil such a sad love story, opening the readers eyes to such horrors of love and worldly beliefs that we can never.truly live happily in peace. This stanza really is a beauty
Broken hearted people wear tears on their smiling faces.
Their lessons, perhaps too late for learning, have the basis
” A person’s goodness will always shine through the darkness.”
However, in this bloody war, that light has no sharpness
Kudos my friend. ❤️
October 30th, 2023 01:27
Teddy.15 said:
I\'d say this is more than a small tale dear Phil such a sad love story, opening the readers eyes to such horrors of love and worldly beliefs that we can never.truly live happily in peace. This stanza really is a beauty
Broken hearted people wear tears on their smiling faces.
Their lessons, perhaps too late for learning, have the basis
” A person’s goodness will always shine through the darkness.”
However, in this bloody war, that light has no sharpness
Kudos my friend. ❤️
October 30th, 2023 01:27
The Fall
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work Phil. Autumn described beautifully..
October 27th, 2023 10:07
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work Phil. Autumn described beautifully..
October 27th, 2023 10:07
Where She Lies
Neville said:
this is nothing short of brilliant sir Phil .. extraordinarily good wordsmithing and a tale that I\'m sure will resonate with fellas near and far ... one of your very best .. Neville
October 24th, 2023 11:41
Neville said:
this is nothing short of brilliant sir Phil .. extraordinarily good wordsmithing and a tale that I\'m sure will resonate with fellas near and far ... one of your very best .. Neville
October 24th, 2023 11:41
The Violist
Teddy.15 said:
A fabulous Halloween treat the violin was haunted. What an epic I had to read in two sittings. Superb in imagery and very very much enjoyed. Kudos
October 20th, 2023 02:26
Teddy.15 said:
A fabulous Halloween treat the violin was haunted. What an epic I had to read in two sittings. Superb in imagery and very very much enjoyed. Kudos
October 20th, 2023 02:26
REMnants
L. B. Mek said:
\'My age-old dream has lost all its glory
and now, I am your secondhand story.\'
so acutely worded, a relatable read
thank you dear Poet
October 13th, 2023 06:18
L. B. Mek said:
\'My age-old dream has lost all its glory
and now, I am your secondhand story.\'
so acutely worded, a relatable read
thank you dear Poet
October 13th, 2023 06:18
REMnants
Teddy.15 said:
🌹 so very romantic dear Phil. 🌹 a joy to read, very emotional. ❤️
October 11th, 2023 02:33
Teddy.15 said:
🌹 so very romantic dear Phil. 🌹 a joy to read, very emotional. ❤️
October 11th, 2023 02:33
REMnants
Natalie Gladmir said:
Rejoice that you have the ability to LOVE. Many people have lived their whole lives without love, they don’t even know what it is. Be happy.
October 10th, 2023 06:23
Natalie Gladmir said:
Rejoice that you have the ability to LOVE. Many people have lived their whole lives without love, they don’t even know what it is. Be happy.
October 10th, 2023 06:23
REMnants
Neville said:
Clever use off CAPitals Phil and a dreamy love and loss poem in which to lose ourselves while also being reassured that WE are NOT alone .. N
October 10th, 2023 03:09
Neville said:
Clever use off CAPitals Phil and a dreamy love and loss poem in which to lose ourselves while also being reassured that WE are NOT alone .. N
October 10th, 2023 03:09
Take Five
Goldfinch60 said:
May that kiss come to you and last forever Phil.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
May that kiss come to you and last forever Phil.
Andy
October 10th, 2023 01:21
Nightfall
Bella Shepard said:
Creepy, eerie, oooh goes bump in the night. I\'m envisioning Frank Langella in Dracula ,1979, and a little Everly Brothers \"Crying In The Rain\". You\'ve set the perfect stage for this fatal encouter, love for eternity. Thank you for this Halloween Treat!
October 9th, 2023 15:59
Bella Shepard said:
Creepy, eerie, oooh goes bump in the night. I\'m envisioning Frank Langella in Dracula ,1979, and a little Everly Brothers \"Crying In The Rain\". You\'ve set the perfect stage for this fatal encouter, love for eternity. Thank you for this Halloween Treat!
October 9th, 2023 15:59
Nightfall
Neville said:
around these here parts, we call this a love poem .. because it is undeniably a love poem write the way through until the very last bite .. ❣️🩸❣️
October 9th, 2023 03:16
Neville said:
around these here parts, we call this a love poem .. because it is undeniably a love poem write the way through until the very last bite .. ❣️🩸❣️
October 9th, 2023 03:16
Nightfall
L. B. Mek said:
treat... is ermm
One, word
yeah, some other words
ermm.. come to mind
(i\'m getting back beneath the covers
until your vivid imagery passes-by)
lol thanks for sharing, dear Poet
\'I’ll be hearing your lies until I hear your sighs.\'
great poetry!
October 9th, 2023 03:14
L. B. Mek said:
treat... is ermm
One, word
yeah, some other words
ermm.. come to mind
(i\'m getting back beneath the covers
until your vivid imagery passes-by)
lol thanks for sharing, dear Poet
\'I’ll be hearing your lies until I hear your sighs.\'
great poetry!
October 9th, 2023 03:14
Take Five
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Phil, this actually made me cry utterly beautiful poetry ❤️
October 7th, 2023 16:19
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Phil, this actually made me cry utterly beautiful poetry ❤️
October 7th, 2023 16:19
Take Five
Neville said:
You are amazing sir Fences27 .. this is amazing ..
so much ink perfectly spilt ..
my regards to your pen .. Neville
October 7th, 2023 15:48
Neville said:
You are amazing sir Fences27 .. this is amazing ..
so much ink perfectly spilt ..
my regards to your pen .. Neville
October 7th, 2023 15:48
The Fall
Neville said:
I really like the way you did this Phil ..
I could feel myself warming to her only to be frozen out of the picture by that unexpected twist you incorporated toward the end .. when winter eventually arrived .. very nice indeed sir Fences ..
AGT\'s .. Neville
October 7th, 2023 01:06
Neville said:
I really like the way you did this Phil ..
I could feel myself warming to her only to be frozen out of the picture by that unexpected twist you incorporated toward the end .. when winter eventually arrived .. very nice indeed sir Fences ..
AGT\'s .. Neville
October 7th, 2023 01:06
The Fall
L. B. Mek said:
(Brilliant!
Thank you for inspiring
my feeble reply, cherished poet)
calamity likes its cyclic patterns
first comes that Spring of life
where all is ubiquitous gaiety
Then that heat of Summer passion
where forever\'s
taste as easy as candyfloss breath
then fall arrives, scarfs and coats
we feel that looming menace in that
crisp, air
then before we know it, it\'s a repeat
of that too-late Winter
and all is ash white warped dreams
and frozen memory\'s, we fight
to keep ourselves from forgetting
falling asleep with muted screams
of
\'I
mustremember
She must
beremembered
I can\'t forget
I can\'t
Let her die twice
Whilst i still
drawbreath....\'
October 6th, 2023 08:08
L. B. Mek said:
(Brilliant!
Thank you for inspiring
my feeble reply, cherished poet)
calamity likes its cyclic patterns
first comes that Spring of life
where all is ubiquitous gaiety
Then that heat of Summer passion
where forever\'s
taste as easy as candyfloss breath
then fall arrives, scarfs and coats
we feel that looming menace in that
crisp, air
then before we know it, it\'s a repeat
of that too-late Winter
and all is ash white warped dreams
and frozen memory\'s, we fight
to keep ourselves from forgetting
falling asleep with muted screams
of
\'I
mustremember
She must
beremembered
I can\'t forget
I can\'t
Let her die twice
Whilst i still
drawbreath....\'
October 6th, 2023 08:08
The Fall
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Phil, one of the best ever autumn poems I\'ve ever read, full of charm and beauty, truly breathtaking ❤️
October 6th, 2023 00:46
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Phil, one of the best ever autumn poems I\'ve ever read, full of charm and beauty, truly breathtaking ❤️
October 6th, 2023 00:46
Sex life of writers
Neville said:
Now how could I resist taking a peek at this little masterpiece & stroke of genius all rolled into one and wrapped in a tastefully subtle but double entendred bite sized chunk of erotic poetry ..
Well I couldn\'t could I .. but I seriously hope that now I have, that others might dare venture back though your portfolio and enjoy some of your earlier ink as much as I have and still do ..
All Good Things, Neville
October 5th, 2023 03:02
Neville said:
Now how could I resist taking a peek at this little masterpiece & stroke of genius all rolled into one and wrapped in a tastefully subtle but double entendred bite sized chunk of erotic poetry ..
Well I couldn\'t could I .. but I seriously hope that now I have, that others might dare venture back though your portfolio and enjoy some of your earlier ink as much as I have and still do ..
All Good Things, Neville
October 5th, 2023 03:02
A Summer Affair
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Phil, may you bring her home.
Andy
September 19th, 2023 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Phil, may you bring her home.
Andy
September 19th, 2023 00:40
A Summer Affair
Doggerel Dave said:
What\'s to be said here that hasn\'t been said above?....that last stanza........
September 18th, 2023 17:30
Doggerel Dave said:
What\'s to be said here that hasn\'t been said above?....that last stanza........
September 18th, 2023 17:30
A Summer Affair
Neville said:
dagnabit .. this could so easily have been me and ****** or me and ******** two whole summers five years apart and in both the UK and in Israel ..
that last stanza of yours is most definitely what I both said and thought and have since written about umpteen times .. so well scripted my friend .......... Neville
September 18th, 2023 12:41
Neville said:
dagnabit .. this could so easily have been me and ****** or me and ******** two whole summers five years apart and in both the UK and in Israel ..
that last stanza of yours is most definitely what I both said and thought and have since written about umpteen times .. so well scripted my friend .......... Neville
September 18th, 2023 12:41
A Summer Affair
Bella Shepard said:
Reading this poem, it\'s as if I were watching it in a darkend movie theatre, getting lost in these two people on the screen and hoping for a happy ending. Then at the end I can hear \"Take good care of my baby\" in the background. You\'ve truly created a \"Magic Moment\", in this Summer Affair, exquisitely written, and a joy to read!
September 18th, 2023 12:39
Bella Shepard said:
Reading this poem, it\'s as if I were watching it in a darkend movie theatre, getting lost in these two people on the screen and hoping for a happy ending. Then at the end I can hear \"Take good care of my baby\" in the background. You\'ve truly created a \"Magic Moment\", in this Summer Affair, exquisitely written, and a joy to read!
September 18th, 2023 12:39
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