Comments received on poems by DarkRider
Lost Love
swingline said:
I guess you must keep score , 1 good , 2 bad and at the end of the day tally up the sheet .
May 10th, 2017 18:39
swingline said:
I guess you must keep score , 1 good , 2 bad and at the end of the day tally up the sheet .
May 10th, 2017 18:39
Leaving Midnight Scars
swingline said:
Life ripped apart , full of fear and uncertainties , With a bleak future full of revenge bayoneted into you .
May 8th, 2017 07:26
swingline said:
Life ripped apart , full of fear and uncertainties , With a bleak future full of revenge bayoneted into you .
May 8th, 2017 07:26
Finally Free
swingline said:
Ha ha , Outback\'s comments are the vegetable soup of emotions . Full of good things , healthy for you and are so good .
Freedom as you described ; bird , fish , beast and man that comes with no strings attached . Clip a birds wings and they no longer fly , a fish on a line is doomed to die , a man gets married he is tied down .
May 7th, 2017 06:37
swingline said:
Ha ha , Outback\'s comments are the vegetable soup of emotions . Full of good things , healthy for you and are so good .
Freedom as you described ; bird , fish , beast and man that comes with no strings attached . Clip a birds wings and they no longer fly , a fish on a line is doomed to die , a man gets married he is tied down .
May 7th, 2017 06:37
Just Me And My Mind
Mizzy said:
I found this poem very funny. I know its dark but its also funny. You are none of those things, you cant really think you are.
May 6th, 2017 17:09
Mizzy said:
I found this poem very funny. I know its dark but its also funny. You are none of those things, you cant really think you are.
May 6th, 2017 17:09
Just Me And My Mind
Rajkumar said:
You have expressed your feelings in words which is a difficult task...but u did it well
May 6th, 2017 02:02
Rajkumar said:
You have expressed your feelings in words which is a difficult task...but u did it well
May 6th, 2017 02:02
Caged
swingline said:
Yes I read and reread your poem from your perspective and I could feel the isolation and separation from the things that you value . I guess treatment involves some form of separation from something that is harmful . But along with the surgery sometimes the good is cut out too . Hopefully you have recovered and by writing and sharing this I feel like you have move on .
May 5th, 2017 16:45
swingline said:
Yes I read and reread your poem from your perspective and I could feel the isolation and separation from the things that you value . I guess treatment involves some form of separation from something that is harmful . But along with the surgery sometimes the good is cut out too . Hopefully you have recovered and by writing and sharing this I feel like you have move on .
May 5th, 2017 16:45
