Comments received on poems by mariposa
for i have failed you
lovelydarkanddeep said:
i can\'t quite explain in words the reason i like this, it\'s very unique. good job-izzy
May 18th, 2017 19:57
lovelydarkanddeep said:
i can\'t quite explain in words the reason i like this, it\'s very unique. good job-izzy
May 18th, 2017 19:57
for i have failed you
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MARI for an intriguing poem ! Sucking venom from vipers can be lethal and turning blue is the first sign. I was trained into how to such venom from form a person ~ if they were so inflicted ! Thankfully i have never had to put it into practice ~ but would for you of course ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
May 18th, 2017 08:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MARI for an intriguing poem ! Sucking venom from vipers can be lethal and turning blue is the first sign. I was trained into how to such venom from form a person ~ if they were so inflicted ! Thankfully i have never had to put it into practice ~ but would for you of course ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
May 18th, 2017 08:54
why does love exist
Mizzy said:
it exists so that people have an excuse to have lots of humpy bumpy in the name of \'love\'
May 9th, 2017 21:57
Mizzy said:
it exists so that people have an excuse to have lots of humpy bumpy in the name of \'love\'
May 9th, 2017 21:57
why does love exist
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome MARI ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ which poses a lot of QUESTIONS but provides no ANSWERS. Love is EXPERIENTIAL ~ not just something to write about or debate about. It is something we feel deeply about ~ and it can be AGONY or ECSTASY or both ~ depending on your experience ! We are all born with an innate capacity to LOVE and be LOVED. From the minute our loving MUMMY gazes into our eyes when we are born until the day we die ~ love is Universal and we can never escape it ! Like all our emotions it has a POSITIVE (True Love) and a NEGATIVE (Betrayal of Love) side. As we grow up we experience both and it causes us to ask the questions you are asking \"WHY DOES LOVE EXIST\" Despite everything \"A World without Love\" would be Hell ~ God is Love so where True Love abounds it is Heaven ! Thanks for sharing ~ it made me think. I am in a \"loving relationship\" at the moment and I hope and pray you will find True Love too ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B. Love the structure of your Poem ~ it is bursting with Rhyme & Rhythm !
May 9th, 2017 17:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome MARI ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ which poses a lot of QUESTIONS but provides no ANSWERS. Love is EXPERIENTIAL ~ not just something to write about or debate about. It is something we feel deeply about ~ and it can be AGONY or ECSTASY or both ~ depending on your experience ! We are all born with an innate capacity to LOVE and be LOVED. From the minute our loving MUMMY gazes into our eyes when we are born until the day we die ~ love is Universal and we can never escape it ! Like all our emotions it has a POSITIVE (True Love) and a NEGATIVE (Betrayal of Love) side. As we grow up we experience both and it causes us to ask the questions you are asking \"WHY DOES LOVE EXIST\" Despite everything \"A World without Love\" would be Hell ~ God is Love so where True Love abounds it is Heaven ! Thanks for sharing ~ it made me think. I am in a \"loving relationship\" at the moment and I hope and pray you will find True Love too ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B. Love the structure of your Poem ~ it is bursting with Rhyme & Rhythm !
May 9th, 2017 17:42
