Comments received on poems by Lostinthisworld
September Sang to Me
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write may that storm stir up more words in your mind.
December 12th, 2019 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write may that storm stir up more words in your mind.
December 12th, 2019 01:57
The Master of My Pain
sylviasearcher said:
I think perhaps we can only own ourselves?
December 3rd, 2018 01:55
sylviasearcher said:
I think perhaps we can only own ourselves?
December 3rd, 2018 01:55
Page 43
orchidee said:
You tried page 44? Any words on that page, if Page 43 is blank? One way of seeing this poem?!
August 31st, 2018 14:22
orchidee said:
You tried page 44? Any words on that page, if Page 43 is blank? One way of seeing this poem?!
August 31st, 2018 14:22
Black Angel
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
abuse is such a terrible thing ... very well expressed !
January 21st, 2018 08:55
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
abuse is such a terrible thing ... very well expressed !
January 21st, 2018 08:55
I am Beautiful
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
dark but well expressed !
January 21st, 2018 08:54
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
dark but well expressed !
January 21st, 2018 08:54
Wet
FredPeyer said:
So sorry I did not see your poems before. This one is so beautifully written and with so much meaning in so few words, I had to make it a favorite.
January 21st, 2018 02:38
FredPeyer said:
So sorry I did not see your poems before. This one is so beautifully written and with so much meaning in so few words, I had to make it a favorite.
January 21st, 2018 02:38
Circus Boy
FredPeyer said:
You do have a way with words, Lostinthisworld (Litw), and the circus metaphor adds a new dimension.
So well written!
January 21st, 2018 02:34
FredPeyer said:
You do have a way with words, Lostinthisworld (Litw), and the circus metaphor adds a new dimension.
So well written!
January 21st, 2018 02:34
Bloody Hands
FredPeyer said:
This one stopped me and made me think. I love shorties that leave a lot open to the imagination.
January 21st, 2018 02:32
FredPeyer said:
This one stopped me and made me think. I love shorties that leave a lot open to the imagination.
January 21st, 2018 02:32
I am Beautiful
FredPeyer said:
Incredibly realistic, with unexpected twists and turns, and a hard hitting last line! Well done!
January 21st, 2018 02:30
FredPeyer said:
Incredibly realistic, with unexpected twists and turns, and a hard hitting last line! Well done!
January 21st, 2018 02:30
Mmmm
FredPeyer said:
Wow, you really, really must be in love!
Like it a lot! Well written.
January 21st, 2018 02:20
FredPeyer said:
Wow, you really, really must be in love!
Like it a lot! Well written.
January 21st, 2018 02:20
Black Angel
burning-embers said:
Maybe you were created the perfect victim. The famous dance of life. It takes two to tango. When one has the will to walk away, the dance is over.
July 17th, 2017 22:52
burning-embers said:
Maybe you were created the perfect victim. The famous dance of life. It takes two to tango. When one has the will to walk away, the dance is over.
July 17th, 2017 22:52
Black Angel
Stumped said:
I love the use of Stockholm here. Keep up the nice work.
July 17th, 2017 22:49
Stumped said:
I love the use of Stockholm here. Keep up the nice work.
July 17th, 2017 22:49
