Comments received on poems by mbird72



My Smile
onepauly said:

undiscribable emotions.

July 27th, 2017 18:42

My Smile
charlesbarrett said:

This is beautiful. The pain and the struggle come across very vividly. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing. And may you one day be able to smile again. Great piece of art here.

July 27th, 2017 09:07

Fears
ShannonXx said:

A great read and write

July 26th, 2017 15:27

Fears
mbird72 said:

Thank you yes my friend is all the love combined together that I\'ve ever been shown. You are all masters at your craft and I\'m honored by your comments

July 24th, 2017 09:19

Fears
burning-embers said:

Lovely read. I felt this.

July 24th, 2017 08:41

Fears
Seek said:

Your friend within is certain to drive the fears away. Your soul is no longer neglected as peace and light embrace you. Touching piece.

July 24th, 2017 08:37

You are the poetry
Renzi said:

You ARE the poetry ❤ so lovely 😊

July 24th, 2017 03:38

You are the poetry
mbird72 said:

you are all so kind to me! Thank you


July 23rd, 2017 16:25

You are the poetry
ShannonXx said:

This was wonderful!

July 23rd, 2017 08:47

A Suicide
Poetic Dan said:

Raw emotion
I felt that pain
You\'re on your way
As I am too

Keep writing!
You\'ll look back
see you reversed
All that you once felt




July 23rd, 2017 04:27

You are the poetry
Poetic Dan said:

I am the poetry
So are you
We write these words
To tell our own truths

This was fantastic!
Thank you

July 23rd, 2017 04:21

A Suicide
malubotelho said:

It is a pouring of emotions. Nicely written.

July 14th, 2017 09:47

A Suicide
ShannonXx said:

This is a touching piece, really enjoyed reading

July 14th, 2017 07:29

A Suicide
burning-embers said:

Something you do most definately have mbird72 is that rare ability to put your heartfelt feelings into the written word. I remember when you zonked me with \'The Stonecutter\' on 1st July after your dream. Here today you\'ve communicated clearly and in such a way that we reach out to you. Yesterday i wrote a piece which ripped me apart in the writing because it was so heartfelt. Today i wrote a nonsense for relief. It would be good to see you using you undoubted skilll to write about anything here for us, buses, cows, telegraph poles - the subject doesn\'t matter. Because what we see is your way of expressing your angle and not the buses and cows.. More please.


July 14th, 2017 04:12

My Scream
mbird72 said:

Thanks Kat. I was afraid no one would like it

July 13th, 2017 13:12

The Stonecutter
Heather T said:

Fantastic first post!

July 1st, 2017 19:09

The Stonecutter
ShannonXx said:

A moving poem! Loved the words used, very expressive

July 1st, 2017 13:51

The Stonecutter
burning-embers said:

Spellbound by this! Stunning! I have read this four times, it grips me. I want more.

July 1st, 2017 12:39

The Stonecutter
Louis Gibbs said:

I am deeply moved by this beautiful poem, mbird. A killer ending! You have the gift of exquisite expression. I look for more from you.

July 1st, 2017 11:29