Comments received on poems by hidden.shine
Pages in Passion
MendedFences27 said:
So much talent for 17, make sure you pursue it.
This poem,\'s metaphor (and a few similes) you have carried completely and thoroughly to the poem\'s end. If true , be sure to keep that book open. ( sugg, read Michael E.\'s poem on art in today\'s Community poems.) A very fine piece of literature. Keep on writing. Your talent is boundless. Loved this one FAV. _Phil A.
July 29th, 2019 16:05
MendedFences27 said:
So much talent for 17, make sure you pursue it.
This poem,\'s metaphor (and a few similes) you have carried completely and thoroughly to the poem\'s end. If true , be sure to keep that book open. ( sugg, read Michael E.\'s poem on art in today\'s Community poems.) A very fine piece of literature. Keep on writing. Your talent is boundless. Loved this one FAV. _Phil A.
July 29th, 2019 16:05
the aftermath
MendedFences27 said:
So much said in 15 words. Obviously. someone does not appreciate your talent. Nice sketch too. Crying eyes.
Good one. - Phil A.
July 29th, 2019 15:54
MendedFences27 said:
So much said in 15 words. Obviously. someone does not appreciate your talent. Nice sketch too. Crying eyes.
Good one. - Phil A.
July 29th, 2019 15:54
Anxious Reflection (a sonnet)
MendedFences27 said:
I find this brilliant. Your words and use of language make this poem flow ever so freely. Your rhyming is good enough as to be unnoticed. A beautiful if also dark poem. Loved it - Phil A.
July 29th, 2019 15:50
MendedFences27 said:
I find this brilliant. Your words and use of language make this poem flow ever so freely. Your rhyming is good enough as to be unnoticed. A beautiful if also dark poem. Loved it - Phil A.
July 29th, 2019 15:50
why you should always water your flowers
Lorna said:
Adorable........... really like this little one. (just one thing - \"drought\" is the spelling)........
April 19th, 2018 06:23
Lorna said:
Adorable........... really like this little one. (just one thing - \"drought\" is the spelling)........
April 19th, 2018 06:23
LTMS:
Heather T said:
Thank you for sharing this piece of you. I\'m happy that you found your healing.
June 23rd, 2017 14:01
Heather T said:
Thank you for sharing this piece of you. I\'m happy that you found your healing.
June 23rd, 2017 14:01
Pages in Passion
The Invisible said:
I can say this is probably one of my favorite poems by far. This is really great.
June 12th, 2017 14:41
The Invisible said:
I can say this is probably one of my favorite poems by far. This is really great.
June 12th, 2017 14:41
What If?
Augustus said:
I could easily be buried at sea. Many of the old movies depicted such when a passenger of shipmate died, I could be bear scat for a mother with a cub. The ocean is so vast and powerful. It would be like being a God. The seas are calmer, not as scary. This is a great metaphor for the turmoil within, aware of the murderous rage that could be unleashed or the stability of the land. Between is the sea. Nicely done.
June 1st, 2017 11:45
Augustus said:
I could easily be buried at sea. Many of the old movies depicted such when a passenger of shipmate died, I could be bear scat for a mother with a cub. The ocean is so vast and powerful. It would be like being a God. The seas are calmer, not as scary. This is a great metaphor for the turmoil within, aware of the murderous rage that could be unleashed or the stability of the land. Between is the sea. Nicely done.
June 1st, 2017 11:45
Anxious Reflection (a sonnet)
whisperingquill said:
Damn, sorry friend if this is true
As far as the poem tremendous flow and rhyme my compliments
Stay scribing and striving dance within the surviving
May 31st, 2017 17:25
whisperingquill said:
Damn, sorry friend if this is true
As far as the poem tremendous flow and rhyme my compliments
Stay scribing and striving dance within the surviving
May 31st, 2017 17:25
Anxious Reflection (a sonnet)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ Love the melancholy it is complemented by the picture ! In my experience ~ Sometimes life resonates the sadness in your Poem.~ Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem ~Tthank B.
May 31st, 2017 17:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ Love the melancholy it is complemented by the picture ! In my experience ~ Sometimes life resonates the sadness in your Poem.~ Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poem ~Tthank B.
May 31st, 2017 17:22
