Comments received on poems by Rshafran



The Autumn of My 57th Year
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Well done; rich in diction, rhyme, and meter.

June 28th, 2017 21:16

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Gary Edward Geraci said:

Enjoyed your poem! Why of course the chicken came first: in \"form\" as the Creator envisioned it; serving man (delicious breakfast, lunch, dinner, and every snack in between) and glorifying God in the process!

June 28th, 2017 20:59

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FredPeyer said:

What a great poem. Now just add Chaos Theory and you have it all!

June 28th, 2017 20:18

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malubotelho said:

Lovely put and expressed. Thanks

June 28th, 2017 19:25

The Autumn of My 57th Year
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write. Welcome to MPS.

June 7th, 2017 01:05