Comments received on poems by bernard franklin
Futures End
Fran said:
Great subject to write about, not easy though, but what a marvellous outcome! You tend to write these really striking conclusions at the end of your work, and you did it again right here! Definitely a 10
August 30th, 2010 09:10
Fran said:
Great subject to write about, not easy though, but what a marvellous outcome! You tend to write these really striking conclusions at the end of your work, and you did it again right here! Definitely a 10
August 30th, 2010 09:10
Secret Love
jabberm said:
great affection to be kept for long. only deep affections can servive
the tides and ebbs of everyday troubles. very well penned. thanks poet
August 29th, 2010 13:23
jabberm said:
great affection to be kept for long. only deep affections can servive
the tides and ebbs of everyday troubles. very well penned. thanks poet
August 29th, 2010 13:23
The Silent Scream
nikhilps said:
wow! nice work! its touching and liked that line " sometimes i think im screaming at the god,as its his hand cradling my soul" nice work really good!!
August 28th, 2010 03:26
nikhilps said:
wow! nice work! its touching and liked that line " sometimes i think im screaming at the god,as its his hand cradling my soul" nice work really good!!
August 28th, 2010 03:26
The Silent Scream
Kri2arch said:
This is a great work,its very intresting. It explains the worries of man.
August 27th, 2010 05:05
Kri2arch said:
This is a great work,its very intresting. It explains the worries of man.
August 27th, 2010 05:05
A Mandate for Hypocrisy
Fran said:
I think it really shows that the subject is something you have a very strong opinion about, and as a reader you really get carried away by the emotions in which this poem bathes. Anyway, that's how I experienced it.
Very powerful my friend!
August 26th, 2010 12:19
Fran said:
I think it really shows that the subject is something you have a very strong opinion about, and as a reader you really get carried away by the emotions in which this poem bathes. Anyway, that's how I experienced it.
Very powerful my friend!
August 26th, 2010 12:19
ADDICTION
Fran said:
Beautifully written. Great choice of words and the conclusion at the end..I don't think you could have put it any better.
Impressive, yet again!
August 25th, 2010 06:22
Fran said:
Beautifully written. Great choice of words and the conclusion at the end..I don't think you could have put it any better.
Impressive, yet again!
August 25th, 2010 06:22
The Immortal Spirit
lulu said:
bravo....amazing....great... just keep it up :D
cheers :D
August 23rd, 2010 08:36
lulu said:
bravo....amazing....great... just keep it up :D
cheers :D
August 23rd, 2010 08:36
Bagman Pete
Fran said:
Another impressive piece of work.
I think this has a really good flow to it and I love the last few lines. Very nicely done!
August 23rd, 2010 02:55
Fran said:
Another impressive piece of work.
I think this has a really good flow to it and I love the last few lines. Very nicely done!
August 23rd, 2010 02:55
The River of Life
Fran said:
First of all; Wauw, what a beautiful poem.
I was really taken aback by this work. I like the way it reads, I like the content, I like the way you integrated the four seasons in it, and I think the title couldn't be more fitting. I actually just like everything about it. Really, really good.
August 21st, 2010 04:32
Fran said:
First of all; Wauw, what a beautiful poem.
I was really taken aback by this work. I like the way it reads, I like the content, I like the way you integrated the four seasons in it, and I think the title couldn't be more fitting. I actually just like everything about it. Really, really good.
August 21st, 2010 04:32
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