Comments received on poems by bernard franklin
ADDICTION
Fran said:
Beautifully written. Great choice of words and the conclusion at the end..I don't think you could have put it any better.
Impressive, yet again!
August 25th, 2010 06:22
Fran said:
Beautifully written. Great choice of words and the conclusion at the end..I don't think you could have put it any better.
Impressive, yet again!
August 25th, 2010 06:22
The Immortal Spirit
lulu said:
bravo....amazing....great... just keep it up :D
cheers :D
August 23rd, 2010 08:36
lulu said:
bravo....amazing....great... just keep it up :D
cheers :D
August 23rd, 2010 08:36
Bagman Pete
Fran said:
Another impressive piece of work.
I think this has a really good flow to it and I love the last few lines. Very nicely done!
August 23rd, 2010 02:55
Fran said:
Another impressive piece of work.
I think this has a really good flow to it and I love the last few lines. Very nicely done!
August 23rd, 2010 02:55
The River of Life
Fran said:
First of all; Wauw, what a beautiful poem.
I was really taken aback by this work. I like the way it reads, I like the content, I like the way you integrated the four seasons in it, and I think the title couldn't be more fitting. I actually just like everything about it. Really, really good.
August 21st, 2010 04:32
Fran said:
First of all; Wauw, what a beautiful poem.
I was really taken aback by this work. I like the way it reads, I like the content, I like the way you integrated the four seasons in it, and I think the title couldn't be more fitting. I actually just like everything about it. Really, really good.
August 21st, 2010 04:32
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