Comments received on poems by bernard franklin
The 'Label' Generation
colly wally said:
My thoughts too. The now gereration is so much like this. Though it is written in humour, I can't help but think that people forget that this life is lived against the backdrop of eternity, and get their eyes on those things that can't finally count for anything worthwhile.
April 13th, 2011 01:40
colly wally said:
My thoughts too. The now gereration is so much like this. Though it is written in humour, I can't help but think that people forget that this life is lived against the backdrop of eternity, and get their eyes on those things that can't finally count for anything worthwhile.
April 13th, 2011 01:40
When Faith Is Not Enough
colly wally said:
Yes, most of us feel that way at times, but I'm thankful that I can at bottom line, simply trust in His great mercy and love in spite of how I feel.
Good stuff Bernard.
April 13th, 2011 01:36
colly wally said:
Yes, most of us feel that way at times, but I'm thankful that I can at bottom line, simply trust in His great mercy and love in spite of how I feel.
Good stuff Bernard.
April 13th, 2011 01:36
**** DIANA ****
colly wally said:
I too feel for that poor lost person who simply did what she thought was right.
April 13th, 2011 01:33
colly wally said:
I too feel for that poor lost person who simply did what she thought was right.
April 13th, 2011 01:33
My Mother in Law
colly wally said:
If you weren't in her bad books before, you must be now. Good luck to ya.
April 13th, 2011 01:31
colly wally said:
If you weren't in her bad books before, you must be now. Good luck to ya.
April 13th, 2011 01:31
When Faith Is Not Enough
Lonelykaren said:
i like it though i might not feel him i know he exist. i try hard but he dosent answer anymore i think he gave up on me.
other words great poem..
January 25th, 2011 19:41
Lonelykaren said:
i like it though i might not feel him i know he exist. i try hard but he dosent answer anymore i think he gave up on me.
other words great poem..
January 25th, 2011 19:41
Spellbound
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is a delightfully sweet romantic tribute to the lucky girl you love. Thanks for sharing it. May you two keep each other happy for EVER.
January 17th, 2011 21:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is a delightfully sweet romantic tribute to the lucky girl you love. Thanks for sharing it. May you two keep each other happy for EVER.
January 17th, 2011 21:05
Spellbound
Lifewellspoken said:
"liquid sunshine flows" I love that saying.
Good read, thanks for sharing.
January 17th, 2011 14:19
Lifewellspoken said:
"liquid sunshine flows" I love that saying.
Good read, thanks for sharing.
January 17th, 2011 14:19
Spellbound
StormyDay said:
So beautiful and well written; it flows like a babbling brook. Keep it up.
December 15th, 2010 12:11
StormyDay said:
So beautiful and well written; it flows like a babbling brook. Keep it up.
December 15th, 2010 12:11
Souled Out
nair36 said:
I'm speachless sometimes when I read Great poems like this. Very good poem.
October 2nd, 2010 21:25
nair36 said:
I'm speachless sometimes when I read Great poems like this. Very good poem.
October 2nd, 2010 21:25
The Cross
nair36 said:
I like your poems,
They always have great rhythm and great meaning to it.
October 2nd, 2010 21:22
nair36 said:
I like your poems,
They always have great rhythm and great meaning to it.
October 2nd, 2010 21:22
Spellbound
nair36 said:
Too bad the rating thing wont go higher than ten because this poem says a million words in "spellpounding" art. Great poem Bernard. I'm sure your new wife to be will love it.
September 28th, 2010 19:56
nair36 said:
Too bad the rating thing wont go higher than ten because this poem says a million words in "spellpounding" art. Great poem Bernard. I'm sure your new wife to be will love it.
September 28th, 2010 19:56
Spellbound
jvl narasimha rao said:
this is a wonderful romantic poem.I have rated this with a 10
September 28th, 2010 11:21
jvl narasimha rao said:
this is a wonderful romantic poem.I have rated this with a 10
September 28th, 2010 11:21
The Cross
Fran said:
You seem to write one splendid poem after the other, so yet again, great job.
September 26th, 2010 09:25
Fran said:
You seem to write one splendid poem after the other, so yet again, great job.
September 26th, 2010 09:25
Loneliness
nair36 said:
I'd give it a 20 if I could. I feel like this everyday. This poem had very great rythem to it. It's sad but it's real as I'm sure you can understand that. I'm sure through my poems you already know I've tried to kill myslef countless times but I only failed. I'm only 17 but I have learned that it is not the answer to a problem or as you stated in your poem, "Lonliness". I struggle with this everyday man and I just think of all the people I would hurt if I acted on those urges. You are a great poet and a great friend on this site that I definately know I can relate to. Just keep your head up man and trust me you are definately not alone.
-Rob
September 22nd, 2010 17:49
nair36 said:
I'd give it a 20 if I could. I feel like this everyday. This poem had very great rythem to it. It's sad but it's real as I'm sure you can understand that. I'm sure through my poems you already know I've tried to kill myslef countless times but I only failed. I'm only 17 but I have learned that it is not the answer to a problem or as you stated in your poem, "Lonliness". I struggle with this everyday man and I just think of all the people I would hurt if I acted on those urges. You are a great poet and a great friend on this site that I definately know I can relate to. Just keep your head up man and trust me you are definately not alone.
-Rob
September 22nd, 2010 17:49
Loneliness
nair36 said:
I'd give it a 20 if I could. I feel like this everyday. This poem had very great rythem to it. It's sad but it's real as I'm sure you can understand that. I'm sure through my poems you already know I've tried to kill myslef countless times but I only failed. I'm only 17 but I have learned that it is not the answer to a problem or as you stated in your poem, "Lonliness". I struggle with this everyday man and I just think of all the people I would hurt if I acted on those urges. You are a great poet and a great friend on this site that I definately know I can relate to. Just keep your head up man.
-Rob
September 22nd, 2010 17:49
nair36 said:
I'd give it a 20 if I could. I feel like this everyday. This poem had very great rythem to it. It's sad but it's real as I'm sure you can understand that. I'm sure through my poems you already know I've tried to kill myslef countless times but I only failed. I'm only 17 but I have learned that it is not the answer to a problem or as you stated in your poem, "Lonliness". I struggle with this everyday man and I just think of all the people I would hurt if I acted on those urges. You are a great poet and a great friend on this site that I definately know I can relate to. Just keep your head up man.
-Rob
September 22nd, 2010 17:49
Missing You
meadowsprings said:
this poem is so beautiful it made cry. you show so much love its refreshing to read something so true and beautiful.
September 21st, 2010 03:54
meadowsprings said:
this poem is so beautiful it made cry. you show so much love its refreshing to read something so true and beautiful.
September 21st, 2010 03:54
Fingers Crossed ??!!
nair36 said:
great poem... i was scared of plane flights too. always at the beginning... but this ws a great and funny poem :)
September 12th, 2010 15:13
nair36 said:
great poem... i was scared of plane flights too. always at the beginning... but this ws a great and funny poem :)
September 12th, 2010 15:13
**** DIANA ****
Fran said:
And again you have written a great poem, really nicely done! When you read it it's obvious her death had an impact on you.
I must say I really think you're a very talented poet. Your friend, Fran
September 12th, 2010 03:04
Fran said:
And again you have written a great poem, really nicely done! When you read it it's obvious her death had an impact on you.
I must say I really think you're a very talented poet. Your friend, Fran
September 12th, 2010 03:04
When Faith Is Not Enough
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Bernard Franklin,Yours is a well written spiritual poem on God(YAHUSHUA).May God bless you!
September 11th, 2010 11:17
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Bernard Franklin,Yours is a well written spiritual poem on God(YAHUSHUA).May God bless you!
September 11th, 2010 11:17
Missing You
Fran said:
Wauw, this is a truly amazing poem! One of my favourites I've read from you. So touching, it honestly moved me. So much love expressed in this piece of work. I love it from beginning to end!
I'd give this an 11 if I could
September 9th, 2010 06:33
Fran said:
Wauw, this is a truly amazing poem! One of my favourites I've read from you. So touching, it honestly moved me. So much love expressed in this piece of work. I love it from beginning to end!
I'd give this an 11 if I could
September 9th, 2010 06:33
When Faith Is Not Enough
AYESHABEG said:
A really great prayer to God we need to do..it's really awe-inspiring!
Ayesha
September 8th, 2010 02:30
AYESHABEG said:
A really great prayer to God we need to do..it's really awe-inspiring!
Ayesha
September 8th, 2010 02:30
OFFSPRING
nair36 said:
you r very good at writing your poems... this is a very good one
September 7th, 2010 18:17
nair36 said:
you r very good at writing your poems... this is a very good one
September 7th, 2010 18:17
A Knight to Remember
AYESHABEG said:
Dear sir,
it is really great poem so plainly explained but stupendous in it's own way.
Ayesha
September 7th, 2010 10:50
AYESHABEG said:
Dear sir,
it is really great poem so plainly explained but stupendous in it's own way.
Ayesha
September 7th, 2010 10:50
A Fresh Start
colly wally said:
Loved this. It transported me into its forest atmosphere. Made me want to be there in person.
September 6th, 2010 20:26
colly wally said:
Loved this. It transported me into its forest atmosphere. Made me want to be there in person.
September 6th, 2010 20:26
JESUS ( Who's He? )
colly wally said:
I agree with the sentiments of this poem. Even many in the Church have lost their way as they yield to the influences of secularism. It's about "me" now, not others and certainly not God.
colly wally
September 6th, 2010 20:20
colly wally said:
I agree with the sentiments of this poem. Even many in the Church have lost their way as they yield to the influences of secularism. It's about "me" now, not others and certainly not God.
colly wally
September 6th, 2010 20:20
The End of The Road
colly wally said:
Hard times either make or break us, and no one can handle the problems but ourselves. We're on our own, but not really. I found in those hopeless, fear-filled, depressing times that in the long term, God was there. Somehow there is a strength that was there all along but not recognised.
colly wally
September 6th, 2010 19:09
colly wally said:
Hard times either make or break us, and no one can handle the problems but ourselves. We're on our own, but not really. I found in those hopeless, fear-filled, depressing times that in the long term, God was there. Somehow there is a strength that was there all along but not recognised.
colly wally
September 6th, 2010 19:09
Missing You
colly wally said:
Bernard, I can empathise with you in this poem. I have children that have made my life so much fun, and when marriage break-up intervened, it was hard on both children and Dad. God bless you friend.
Colly wally
September 6th, 2010 19:03
colly wally said:
Bernard, I can empathise with you in this poem. I have children that have made my life so much fun, and when marriage break-up intervened, it was hard on both children and Dad. God bless you friend.
Colly wally
September 6th, 2010 19:03
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