Comments received on poems by kristy41
Breathe
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Kristy! But just for fun, what if we turn it around to:
If you want to succeed
as bad as you want to breathe
then you\'ll be successful
Couldn\'t resist to play with your words!
August 14th, 2017 16:42
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Kristy! But just for fun, what if we turn it around to:
If you want to succeed
as bad as you want to breathe
then you\'ll be successful
Couldn\'t resist to play with your words!
August 14th, 2017 16:42
My Life
FredPeyer said:
Kristy believe me, no matter how many times you get tired or pull away, there comes a time when you will want to stay. I like the line \"but my life is as lonely as the day i came out\"
A good poem, would like to read more.
July 7th, 2017 15:31
FredPeyer said:
Kristy believe me, no matter how many times you get tired or pull away, there comes a time when you will want to stay. I like the line \"but my life is as lonely as the day i came out\"
A good poem, would like to read more.
July 7th, 2017 15:31
Is It Wrong
Heather T said:
Conflict is hard. The heart can be pretty deceitful. Tread carefully! Wrong really never makes right.
June 26th, 2017 16:32
Heather T said:
Conflict is hard. The heart can be pretty deceitful. Tread carefully! Wrong really never makes right.
June 26th, 2017 16:32
Is It Wrong
FredPeyer said:
A beautifully written poem about conflict. You are damned if you do and damned if you don\'t. Maybe time will tell?
June 26th, 2017 14:27
FredPeyer said:
A beautifully written poem about conflict. You are damned if you do and damned if you don\'t. Maybe time will tell?
June 26th, 2017 14:27
Is It Wrong
Poetic Dan said:
Nice work, I don\'t do it to much but when it comes I am the coin, heads is yes so do what you must, tails is no just let it go ;)
June 26th, 2017 14:09
Poetic Dan said:
Nice work, I don\'t do it to much but when it comes I am the coin, heads is yes so do what you must, tails is no just let it go ;)
June 26th, 2017 14:09
Confession
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I love it kristy41! In my own faith tradition I very much value the sacrament of confession that our Lord left us. I take advantage of it frequently. May our merciful God be with you and with all whom come across this delightful poem.
June 19th, 2017 21:00
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I love it kristy41! In my own faith tradition I very much value the sacrament of confession that our Lord left us. I take advantage of it frequently. May our merciful God be with you and with all whom come across this delightful poem.
June 19th, 2017 21:00
